awesome i am a big sakura and sasuke fan!

okay, a few typos in the first section
overall: good humor :P
though i find ur author notes r like the length of ur chapter -.-; try 2 fix that...

lol short - and the title is a bit weird...but still funny x3!

WTF-_- wods cant explain how overboard the naruto bashing is ; would say somting else but as 2 the fact that ur a girl

lmao rofl BEEP code name ima-beat-yo-** says you should make your chapters longer
typo: "code name youthful-dancing-leaf agees"
other than that, good job

keep practing that justu! ;)


~LILY

I love the idea, but you keep forgetting to end sentences with periods.
I also wish the story was longer than the two author's notes.

lolz u make better humor story than romances

This is a really good story so far, keep it up. ;D I loved that Narutard part. xDD Anyways, can't wait to read more!