At first I was going to say that you needed to work on your spelling and grammar, but now I know that you are making an honest effort. Good for you! I have seen a lot of authors that refuse to anything about it. They are extremely annoying. That said, I really like the concept of your story. Most BBI fics work off of the Pride!Ed ending. So seeing one that does not, is refreshing. Don't get me wrong, I love Pride!Ed. I think that you should include Malfoy and Pansy mocking Ed because of his condition. That would be so in character for them.

this is really cool! keep up the good work

a few spelling errors are:

whit is spelled with
ore is spelled or
tough is spelled though
grate is spelled great
fare is spelled fair
dose is spelled does

... i got bored ...

Update, please! Really good ending! Please please please update! thanks.

Please update soon, it sounds very interesting... Will Winry come in?

um, you are spelling 'with' wrong. But otherwise the fic seems good. :)

This story looks awesome...but I can't concentrate on reading it when there are so many trivial spelling errors. These make your story a little difficult to read; maybe you should check it over?

Great fanfic, hope you update soon, i don't mind the spelling mistakes. No need to be too self-conscious. -Sked-San-san

I know its been about a year but I still wish to know if you are continueing this story, and if so If you want I can correct your spelling for you, I realy like this story and it has great potential adn like you said before just a few spelling errors which are easy for me to spot and fix anyways if so contact me at *I dont check the email account for this one because it got uber spammed* anyways looking forward to the next chapter X3

This is a very interesting story! Please update! ^_^

that was really good, i can't wait till you post the next chapter. Also, do you know how ironic miss McNeil is? That is my mom's maiden name.

Wow this is good. Go ED! And Umbridge, i want to kick her asstricks :D lol. Update soon and good job with ur story!

love the story. very funny. can't wait for the next chapter.

Despite spelling errors, this story is AWESOME! XD Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon! ^^

woot plz update soon!