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eris-evans
2008-06-08
ch 9,
abusehey little one
i really enjoyed reading your story its very good, just one request for one of your fans, can you please write an epilogue about the life of Lucy you know when she went back to our world, how she endured the pain, and if her family know and what do they said, please?
Duhreah
2008-06-06
ch 9,
abuseoh my god, this was simply amazing. i don't want it to end!
xSlytherclaWx
2008-06-05
ch 9,
abuseThis was really good... and I'm not just saying that because it's 3:09 in the morning.

I adore Lucian... I don't understand how people who read the books even tolerate Suspian... Lucian's so much better.
xXx-Keldary-Queen-xXx
2008-05-18
ch 9,
abusei simply have one question...
after reading this more carefully (so to better understand, like broken glass)
why didn't caspian pick up on next time you meet it will be in my land?
while i have never read the last battle (because i HATE it when stories are really and truly over, which it would be if i read it, but i must, my mom says-
it seems as if they all meet again, do they not?
so y didn't he hold onto this for comfort at the end?
im not flaming, jus questioning
thanks for a incredible story
now- i assume this series is written pre-last battle?
frolicks.with.froggies
2008-05-18
ch 9,
abuseA beatifuly told story, it does 'Caspian's Queen' justice. You should write an epiloge where they meet in the garden in 'The Last Battle' or somthing like that. It seems so sad to leave it off with them apart and miserabl. It's great story, thankyou for writting it :D
Lucian Dreams
2008-05-18
ch 9,
abuseWow! This was an awesome story. This story is the reason I have become an official Lucian fan. It was very well written. Well, been also intrigued by the pairing with the new movie coming out as well. I sure can't wait to see the movie. Will be going this Tuesday night with my sisters and nieces. Hope to see more Lucian from you.
Mitzuko-chan
2008-05-18
ch 9,
abuseI really can't believe it's over...

It was brief, and yet it was filled with feeling... awesome job, my friend ^^

Well, on to "Like Broken Glass"! It is indeed a comfort that you decided to make a sequel. I shall renegate of Disney's movie in my review of that story xD LOL

But in this review, I want to congratulate you for such a beautiful stoyry, and for guiding us trough this "backstage" of Narnia, if you now what I mean... ^^

Well, great job! Take care! Hope to read from you soon :D
Francienyc
2008-05-16
ch 9,
abuseThis was a *great* last chapter. *Extremely* poignant--I very nearly cried! The image of Lucy passing Rilian to Caspian and just being wrenched from her son was so sad it broke my heart, as was Caspian's ensuing loneliness. The warmth of the sunset dream contrasts very nicely with the cold dawn that comes at the end of the chapter. (Is it dawn? Or night?) I very much empathized with the characters, so much so that I couldn't spot the reference to my own writing! I did wonder about Ramandu's daughter, why she was so accepting? Did she know on her own? Did Aslan tell her? And yet, I don't really mind the mystery--I think it's rather cool that she's so accepting. I'm very excited for the sequel, I must say!

Btw, I must say thanks for the dedication--it's a real honor to not only have a story inspired by something I wrote, but that it's a really excellent story--well that's just the hugest compliment! Man, though, Lucian pairings are so bittersweet! I need to finish that AU so they can be together.
Alquawende
2008-05-15
ch 9,
abuseI really have to pity Ramandu's daughter. She married someone who doesn't seem to even respect her and just went away with another woman. Also, he just hands her a baby and leaves, not bothering to even explain, though she might have an idea. You don't say, but I guess, you are implying that she knows that Caspian was with someone else? I can't pity Caspian in here because he did get himself in the situation he's in and knew what the consequences were in the beginning. What'll Rilian think when he eventually meets his biological mother since he was raised by his father's wife? I do hope he appreciates her, even when he, Rilian, meets Lucy, his mother by blood. These are just my opinions, but I really do like your writing here. It's very well done! Thanks for writing!
Luinlothana
2008-05-14
ch 9,
abuseGreat story. It's visible it grew in more ways than one as it was aproaching the end. The depth of the final chapter was wonderful. As was the fact that you so carefully made it all fit the canon. Good job!
Mitzuko-chan
2008-05-12
ch 8,
abuseHi there, Alli! :D How great that you updated :) I cannot believe there's only one chapter left... T_T This story is way too beautiful

Loved it! As always, beautifuly written and explained; the interconnection with your other story, "A Web Woven" is explained in here... That's good authoring ;D

It really is impressing that you took the time to actually investigate about how a child is born, to give more realism to it... it really speaks greatly of you ^^ I bet all the not-so-pretty research will be useful sometime (apart from the story, of course) and the funny fact at the end (the 13% of the water breaking... dammit, my birth enters in that tiny percentage xD you made me feel special! ^^ LOL xD) really were great ^^ What almost knocked me out of my chair was the spoiler... THAT CAN NOT BE TRUE! And if it is... DAMN YOU, DISNEY! >_< I'm so going to sue them if they dare to put hat in the movie... did they even bothered to read the books, for crying out loud?! Well, I guess I could just go on and on about this, but I don't want to bore you :P

I'll wait impatiently for the last chapter! And for "Like Broken Glass", too :) Take good care of yourself, ok? Bye bye!
Francienyc
2008-05-11
ch 8,
abuseI really, really loved this chapter. I wish I had a way of expressing articulately why. I've been trying to think of it all day, but it's hard to be precise--I just get this lovely, warm feeling from it. I love the images too, of Caspian and Lucy rowing in the boat and Lucy holding Rilian (I *knew* the baby would be Rilian!). Caspian's reactions were also perfect. It's easy to be a little heavy handed in such a situation, but you gave it just enough sweetness and pathos. The only thing I think the chapter could have used was a bit of explanation as to why there was such an elaborate ruse. Why smuggle Lucy outside? You might have said in an earlier chatper and I forgot, but even so, a little reminder would have been helpful and set a better context for the chapter. The other thing I wanted was *more*--more of Caspian's thoughts about his son in particular, more of what's going on in his head. I realize I'll be very sad to see this story done! Will you do an epilogue for Lucy and what happens to her when she has to leave her child behind? If you don't, I just might... ;)
Serenity Usagi Tenou
2008-05-02
ch 7,
abusePoor Lucy! I hate to see her suffer, Lucy's by far one of my fav characters. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Please, update as soon possible, later!
Serenity Usagi Tenou
2008-05-01
ch 6,
abuseAww so cute! This chapter is so wicked!
Serenity Usagi Tenou
2008-05-01
ch 5,
abuseAww this is the sweetest chapter I've read so far. I simply adore, The Call of the Horn. I swear, Love and Rock Music, you write these chapters so beautifully, that I'm sure C.S. Lewis would feel honored to this brilliant tribute to his work. Later!
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