ah loved it!

really good job:) luv it

This is one of the best Trorys out there. You did an amazing job, I love this story.

Great Story!

So I've read this story a few times, and every time I read it I got distacted in one way or another and never left a review. I just came across it again, and realized that at 17 reviews, it is very much underrated, so I thought I should leave my 2 cents: This story is adorable, well-written AND hot, a combination that is definitely hard to come by. I like the way you sort of started in the middle, choosing to show their past friendship and subsequent falling out in memories, rather than at the beginning of the story. Good job, overall.

Great. I just love this story. I really like how you told the story from both sides. And the ending was just hot.

"She couldn’t breathe, but she didn’t care. As long as he didn’t stop, she would gladly never breathe again."

M. Yummier than candy coated with more sugary candy.

When both Rory and Tristan are forced to come to the reality about one another, they realize what better sweet nothings they can bring about in each other by being together, FUSED together, this way. The result is mind-blowing and undeniably hot, despite any cold showers that might attempt to stray things otherwise.

I love this, and I'm rec'cing it on my new rec site as soon as it's up and running. Hope that's all right with you.

HOT HOT HOT! I love how you set up the story and addressed all their issues but also had them grown up and finally willing to accept the other one. Great story! Definitely worth the wait!

loved it become chapter based

very sweet. lol! i liked the last two lines.

lol, i would hope prof tartaglia wouldn't have to hear about that particular chemisty they have, lol. cya later.

holy hottness!

Great story. Loved it.

that was Good!

omg! i t was amazing! write again soon!