Dude, that was wack. One punch is fatal? Sensitive guy. There were a couple grammar issues, minor, like when the queen says not to worry, there's no comma after the "dear." I would make it "...dear," but that's just me. Funny, I would say! I liked it when he said, don't panic, and there was panic in his voice! lolz. Well, ciao for now.

I like Solitaire.

-san

Lols, well I do now. T H I S ROX LIKE HELL !MAAN! It's still gay, but it rocks, na just kidding ROX ALL THE WAY!

I'd... like to know who writes Solitare fan-fictions anyway...

Anyway, awesomeness has occured... again.

It's clubs not clovers...I can't believe there is a solitaire fanfic section, that's just retarted.

Nice though...hehe Ace things.

lol wtf.. ace of clovers? its clubs xDD
but hes dead, who cares. nice work

That was actually really cute and funny! I loved it!

Solitaire fanfic, never fails to amuse! XP

ROTFL