I loved the way the story jumps around to various moments in their lives :) The story as a whole is so original and so vivid. You wrote beautifully!

These were absolutely amazing =]

~~xRGx

i loved it. Great job.

oh, i am now officially a fan. haha. this fanfic's really good! ^_^

I would really enjoy seeing this as a full story! Lol...*Hint Hint*

Seriously though, you are a great writer. I enjoy reading your work.

this was a beautiful and touching chapter.
it touched me.
practically bawling.
awesome work

<3
loved this chapter, so much fluffy goodness

It was really cute and beautiful! Later i'll read again your story but in the good order to see.
You really are a very good author. I add you in my favorites

lacrevette35

ok, seriously, this is the sweetest love story ever. you managed to make me cry, laugh, smile, and feel so many emotions in one amazing fic! I love it!

I love this one. All of them were very moving, especially chapter 9. Although, I'm kinda disappointed that he thought flirting back is okay. If Hermione was flirting with someone else, I'm sure he'd be jealous and think it's wrong.

>> "seemy"- space needed
>> "lether" space needed

OMG- this one was so sad. So touching.

>> "wasno"- space needed

I love all these drabbles. They're so nice and easy to read.

>> "you. . We"- ... (ellipses)

anyways- I love this one. It was hilar.

>> "trial ."- extra space
>> "sheonly"- space needed

sweet and clever story!