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SecretBox
2009-07-13 . chapter 2
Your writing style once again strikes me as so cute; it's simple but not empty. Makes it easy for ppl to understand the situation, yet so romance-like. = D

I can understand Kagome's shock to be sure! I would be too if I were her. Hee, I'm anxious to see the explanation for both Sess and Kikyo's appearance in the modern day world~!

All in all, once again, lovely chappie! Update when you can okie dokie? =3

-♥Sambox
SecretBox
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
You writing style is uber cute; srsly. =3 I know that may make no sense whatsoever, but that's the word that comes to mind!♥ Hee, and I loved the vivid, innocent images you placed in my mind.

It was simply .. pretty. & made me want to read moar~! Welps, off to chappie too now~! ;D

P.S. You write actually better than many people I have seen whose first lang. IS English aha. xD; your mistakes are also very small and easily fixed-- you could perhaps get a beta to help you out? ♥
kyoukochan
2009-02-20 . chapter 2
two words TO CUTE woow it was so cute and what's up with that stuck up kagome urhgghggh i hate her please update more and make it that kikyou has better marks in everything even in sports and archery please i would like to see that well imagiine that lol

great story and plz can you make more moments wih sesshomaru and kikyou please i would really appreaciate it

youre not obliged too anywys but awesome story
shawty f0b
2008-06-16 . chapter 2
you have to update soon!
crescentbellflower
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
me again ahh please update i really like your story
Kiharu3291992
2007-08-13 . chapter 2
u have too write more!
crescentbellflower
2007-07-19 . chapter 2
you story is to good to stop please continue
Sonzai Taz
2007-04-28 . chapter 2
plz UPDATE SOON!
Lieberisse
2007-04-22 . chapter 2
i like it a lot. the grammer's fine. i hope u'll update soon!
Princess Zeena
2007-04-16 . chapter 2
more please
BewilderedLoca
2007-04-13 . chapter 2
yo,I LOVE IT! lol This is really great but it's too short! grr...lol anyway, i love this and i love the way it's coming out also! ^-^ Great Job!

I suck @ reviews lmao
Avelyn Lauren
2007-04-12 . chapter 2
Are they just playing checkup on the two and have actually lived throigh the last 500 years? I'll talk to you later. Arigato and ja ne!
CrisscrossAnime
2007-04-10 . chapter 2
NIce ChApter aLthoUgh it was a bit ShorT... I LikE thE Story Plan So fAr and Hope tHat you WiLL ContInUe To KeeP uP the GooD JOb!! UPDATE SOON! =)
nura23
2007-04-09 . chapter 2
I reli,reli need to know wat next so plz update!!
Cold Kikyo
2007-04-08 . chapter 2
Great chapter,i like it.
Update.^_^
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