Reviews for Breaking of the Heart

Remote Control Princess 2007-04-06 ch 1,	abusePerfect. I really enjoyed this. Dark, angsty, but believable imo. It almost reminds me of some Samantha Spade POV fics from the Without A Trace fandom with Jack. It's also nice to not have Mary-Sue HCR fics where they all lived happily ever after. I particularly liked the ghostly allusions. Definitely favourited, and looking out for more from you :) Becs x
Denese925 2007-04-05 ch 1,	abuseIt is so heartbreakingly them though. Sometimes I believe this is the only way they will connect. Great characterizations.
Anna 2007-04-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat person does that make Calleigh? That makes her one of the uncounted woman who still not demand enough from life, who live a secret life and in my opinion, a pathetic life. Though you wrote a very good and believable story, I don't agree with the role you gave the tough Calleigh. But hey, it's only a story and a good one! Write more!