Great oneshot! Really cute! :)
Keep it up!

Hello there...you reviewed mine, I review yours...^_^

I have to say, I'm not familiar with Code Lyoko, but I did enjoy it nonetheless...

However...(this is the part where most people hold their breath)

I would say that you need to run over it and fix some mechanical errors in there. For example, a couple of misplaced prepositions, some incorrectly used verb tenses, and some punctuation errors. At some places, it seems that it also has not been separated as well as it should have been, mostly when changing scenes. Some of it also seems to run pretty quickly...too quickly for the mind to follow. Slow it down, put more detail in - beef it up. If you like, I would be happy to look at it for you.

If not, and you are insulted by my bold remarks, you may banish me from your kingdom. (I'm in a weird mood.)

Other than that, the story was highly enjoyable. No spelling errors to speak of, and a nice plot with well depicted characters. Good stuff.

B.

This is a good story and it shows how the couples are the same. If you added another chapter to this story on how they made up, it would be good, but it is your story, i'm just making an opinion. Happy Writting

*waits 5 seconds* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Talk about minds thinking alike! HAHAHAHAHA

It's finished??! You must be out of your mind!! I hope there is a sequel...but then again there isn't really much use of one. Aww for Peat's sake just write another story.

Good! I like it! U should totally do a sequil of some sort!!
PS: I like the way it ended!!

lol that was pretty good !funny to

That was great! Loved it!

Hey great one shot! I really liked it! Those two are my fave couples as well! Keep it up!

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