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XBluexFlamingoX
2009-08-12 . chapter 19
-_-! All this build up of ichihime and this big let down :'(! Dont get me wrong it was a great story its just *sigh* I wish... *crys into pillow* WHY!?!?!
XBluexFlamingoX
2009-08-12 . chapter 17
OMG!! Its about dang time ichigo and orihime got some alone time. I live for these moments between them. :D *sigh* Finally, and it was so sweet too xD *squeals*!
XBluexFlamingoX
2009-08-12 . chapter 9
Ok this part got a little creepy O_o seriously, what happened? 0_0 I was totally freaked out and shaking lol I just hope ichigo and orihime get time alone and get to kiss soon :P
XBluexFlamingoX
2009-08-12 . chapter 8
OMG! this is a really nice story. Sorry i would've commented on the first really good chapter but i was too curious about what was gonna happen next xD Really well written, i love it :D
Dellanotte
2009-07-10 . chapter 19
This is the best story I have seen from you, and it appears that you have a knack for this kind of thing. Esp. with the card game chapters, which I felt were the best points in the story. The amnesia makes it canon (and explains Inoue's almost good-bye kiss so far later). The fact that Ichigo goes back to his original n slightly dickish OOC personality is a bonus, although it leaves a less that plesant aftertaste.
The way everything fit together made the story A-rank, as did the surprising ease of finishing. What would be amusing is if they accidently did the whole thing all over again, starting with Kon using Ichigo's body. And they would forget again, and the blooper would repeat again and again throughout the series.
Or not. Funny thought. Overall, amazing story, great depth, and amazing development. I can't even go into the full depth I normally do for a review for two reasons. 1)I's late, even for me. 2)So much happened in each chapter. Which was great. The length allowed for full development and amazing twists. The pairing off was cliche, but was excusdable for being integral to the plot.
The character interactios were solid, although there was slight OOCness. Ichigo, esp, but it seemed that instead of Ishida's usual vocal finesse it appeared that his brain was finding ceative new ways to use a thesaurus. Renji and Rukia were OOC in terms of PDA, esp. Rukia. Renji's sudden depth with the fear bits was anything but OOC and greatly appreciated, and the snippets about their pasts and references to things not really known until later in the series added a lot of credibility.
Again, the game was a great plot device, and seemed to be even better at elongating the story than the double, triple, and quadruple dating. Say what you will about not being able to control the characters, but you've spun a great story, and the best one that I've seen from you. Because I am sadistic, I am probably going to reread the game chapters, if only also because I enjoy watching stupid teens squirm.
Good job, and put out something else like this because it rocked!
Dellanotte
2009-07-09 . chapter 9
I normally don't review until the last or latest chapter, but this story is taking far too many twists for me to do that decently. I'll start with the fact that double dates can be practical with young or blooming relationships, but triple dates are horrible and hilarious in context. Although now it's becoming relatively amusing. Playing with cards made by Urahara, what were they thinking? Hehe. I love the cruelty and posession, but adding in the yodeling comment was perhaps the best part, just because the audience always needs a chance to laugh. Whether this was your intention or not, it was very good for you to do so.
Renji popping up before the Soul Society Ark is definitely noncannon, but amusing and good for plot (and comedy, as we soon discover). Zombie Rukia was quite amusing, and Kon's literal faggotry (not hating) was a bit OOC. I had never considered IshiAri, a bit of IshiInou before I decided on IchiHime, but now that I think about it they would be a good couple.
The card game was a fun twist, esp. for someone as sadistic as me, and the talking without thinking virus + certain characters getting eachothers' undies in a twist ='ed excellent humor + realistic plot continuation.
I'm having fun with this fic, but probably won't continue reading until it's not after midnight.
...Or maybe I'll just keep reading. Either way, I'm favoriting this.
kally-kal
2009-02-04 . chapter 9
Wow! This chapter gave me the chills!
Raven the Ravenous
2008-10-26 . chapter 19
Seeing as I've read 'Orihime's Groundhog Day' (though I don't remember if I had reviewed it?), I can tie in how she came to get that charm in the first place.

And yet another amazing fanfiction comes to a close, but really, magicsmith, this will be one of my most treasured favorites.

Sorry I didn't write a long review. It's hard to focus when there's a little sister bursting into the room every five minutes or so. --;

But I finally managed to finish up reading Court or Caught so now I can focus my attention on Hollow's Charm. :)
Raven the Ravenous
2008-10-26 . chapter 18
Hahaha, I like this particular chapter. Even though the dates were interrupted so much. I love the interactions between the characters, especially Rukia and Renji. Renji eats way too much but I agree that he'd do well in an eating competition.

Orihime wants to just be friends with Ichigo? Well, I don't think I saw that one coming?

The meeting was Keigo was very unusual. It's obvious that Dame Fortune and the Fates has something to do with this.

Looks like the next chapter is the last...
Gaara-l0ve
2008-10-04 . chapter 19
Oh my, what a fantastic chapter. The ending was very well planned, and thought-out. So that's the same charm that got Orihime to act stange in Orihime's groundhog day. It all fits so well together in a big picture. Thank you, for writing this great fanfic; It's one of my favorites. I look forward to updates on Hollow Charm :)

Gaara-l0ve
1Waylander
2008-10-03 . chapter 19
It's so sad how it ends. They all found love but now they lost it with little chance to regain it. It was extremelly well writen. Thank you for a great story.
Keep on writing.
Arwen Mimosa
2008-10-01 . chapter 19
Aw what a sad ending! The story was ** good though, and I was totally thinking "OGD Prequel" as well towards the end.

Please write more IchiHime stories! I love the way you write!
SunsetRainbow
2008-10-01 . chapter 19
This is
AMAZING.

Omg I'm literally hooked on this
UPDATE SON!
Blitch
2008-10-01 . chapter 19
the worse thing about a story that goes back to square one is as if they story never happen but a waste of time...
Ayjah
2008-09-30 . chapter 19
Wow what an unexpected ending but as soon as it hit I thought of the other story... well done though vaguely unsatisfying - much like it must have been for Orihime and Ichigo!
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