gah! more! this is so awesome! faving it ^^

Great to see an update.
So the Master's dead, Rose and the Doctor are in limbo.
Martha and Jack are in the TARDIS with not much to do (like that can end well! maybe not in the Doctor's bed though, with Rose there that might be awkward).

Nice work.

this is great please update soon

"I like oatmeal."
"Not helping."
lmao XD

You just brightened my day thanks ;)

But just like the Doctor, I must say... sex? With JACK? In his BED?? That is wrong on so many levels.
I mean, first of all, Jack and her are friends. I don't think it would matter how torn up she was over the Doctor being seperated from her and them being apart. She wouldn't sleep with Jack. Kindof counterproductive don't you think? And if she did it would probably only be once. If she were drunk. Maybe.
And, second of all, in his BED?! You know I was looking over this story a while back ( a long while back. I forget.) And I thats the part I stopped reading at. I mean, I could buy the thing with sex with Jack ( maybe) but in the Doctor's bed?
That's just an insult. Poor Doctor.
It's not like he swanned off an shagged a girl because they're seperated...
Sorry, had to vent :)
Besides all that I really like your story and would love to see an update soon. :)
P.S. longest review I've ever written. Seriously.

*SQUEE*
This story is SO exciting--I LOVE IT!

Hmm, I see that this story hasn't been updated since April 2, 2008...
*::pleads on bended knee::*
PLEASE, PLEASe, PLEAse, PLEase, PLease, Please, please don't let this story be abandoned!

Woah, Martha is having dream visions--very cool and helpful too.

Oopsie, fall down go boom and see Rose--what a day! LOL

YaHoo! Rose can now see and hear the Doctor--BRILLIANT!

Uh-oh, if Rose asks Yana about his watch, won't that just start the shite storm with his remembering that he is the Master and his stealing the TARDIS and assuming the alias of John Saxon?

Well done--keep up the good work!

Uh-oh... it sounds like maybe the Doctor is perhaps starting to transform into a human--bummer that.
:p

*::cackling::*
Rose snogging the heck out of Martha, and then Jack (a toe curling kiss at that)--kinky! Then the TARDIS having a hissy fit that Jack is on board--EEK!

Very exciting chapter--I love it--keep up the good work!

*::cackling::*
Transformation complete. Now let's see if Rose is able to able to piolet the TARDIS and somehow assimulate information necessary to solve situations that the Doctor would be able to handle... hoping that Jack has NOT taken it upon himself to disable the TARDIS that is.

Very exciting chapter--keep up the good work!

Holy shite, Rose is being physically transformed into a Time Lady--COOL! Let the making of baby Time Lords begin! Or half-breeds even. LOL
;~D

Now to get the Doctor back over into the same universe as Rose so that they can get to work on making a New Gallifrey and a new breed of Time Lords and Ladies.
:D

Well done--keep up the good work!

The Doctor is caught up on what Rose has been up to due to her leaving her written banners around for him to read--Fantastic!

I hope that Rose is able to warn the Doctor of Pete siccing the dogs onto him to sniff out as to whether or not he is a dangerous loonytoon.

It is great that Rose can actually hear the Doctor as she is waking up; but it is a total bummer that upon opening her eyes she is unable to see him and continue to hear him.
:p

I think that it is SO cool that Rose is getting VERY in touch with her spark of the time vortex that she is able to hear the TARDIS' complaints of a tummy ache due to a do-hickey that is stuck or what-have-you.

Great chapter and story--keep up the good work!

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OMG--too cool, if I'm understanding what I'm reading correctly, the Doctor wrote Rose a message in English. I think that it is BRILLIANT that Rose is learning from the TARDIS how to write a note back to him in Gallifryian (spelling?).

Great story--keep up the good work!

'Sliding his arms through his braces, Jack tugged them up onto his shoulders.'
I take it that "braces" are also known as suspenders? I'm just trying to understand what it is that I'm reading, because otherwise it was causing me some confusion. Sorry for not knowing your usage of that word.

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Too cool, all three parties (Rose, Jack, and the Doctor) are starting to make a connection that the dream visions/visitations are related to the box--brilliant!

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I love this next bit with the Doctor in the mental ward contemplating his getting out to investigate his theories.
'... he could just let the village idiot save him. Again.'

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Well done--keep up the good work!

Wierd/neat/fascinating that they (Rose and the Doctor) are able to connect during Near Death Experiences; kind of scary too, you know?

I love this story--keep up the good work!
:D

Sad and cute, I love how they are somehow connecting and giving each some comfort. Now if only one or the other of them would make a conclusion about it and pursue it further to figure out how to use this to their advantage to rescue the Doctor from the alternate dimension.

Good job--keep up the good work!
:D

*SQUEE*
OMG-OMG-OMG

*::grinning with joy::*
They (Rose and the Doctor) made contact somehow--FANTASTIC!

WooHoo, I'm so stoked!

Well done--great story--keep up the good work!