Well you haven't changed it yet but I like this short series. It's adorable and you are really good at subtle affections.

Oh, these were all so brilliant! They were beautifully written. Despite their short lengths, they were able to convey so much warmth and fluff :D I, too, particularly liked the image of Roy searching for his socks, haha :D

I am...stunned. That was the most beautiful series of FMA oneshots I have ever read on this site. Maybe even on the whole web. You actually pulled off using the present tense.

Your words seem to flow; as if they were more suited to a cursive hand rather than typed out words. Good work and keep it up.

i like this story

aww seriously sweet, this was a great series of shorts =]

Beautiful. You may want to change the title and summary, as the piece isnt really about sunlight any longer.

I LOVE THIS FIC; IT MELTS MY FACE!

Aww. Done already? Well, wonderful work! I really love it!

Erinn~

Thanks so much for this fic!

i love your shorts, you depict roy, riza and what i think their relationship would be like perfectly! thankyou :)

aw, that was so cute. i really enjoyed reading these. well done! have a cookie! *holds out RoyRiza cookie jar*
=^-^=

Absoultly fantastic! I hope you do write more because I LOVE your writing!

Jo

x

Squeness! Love it! Sad to see it end, I hope you write more royai in the future.

[pardon lack of caps, my keyboard is broken. been saying that a lot as i leave reviews lately...]

this was a sweet little chapter. i don't know if she'd just go back to sleep, but that's fine. it's no big deal. great chapter! i'm sad this is the end of your little series thingy, but it's great so it's okay that there isn't more coming; just sad.

What a great way to end a series...satisfyingly sweet without being corny. The ending line made me melt.

Wow. So swet! ^^ I loved these, great job!

~Red