Ooooo..Growing dragons. Interesting. I will be reviewing each and every chapter so you know my opinion xD

The reminder of Brom being dead always saddens me. he was a great rolemodel.

Those people sounded extremely rude in disrespectful.

I love the dragons' names you chose! So cute!

Skinning dragons for use as boot?! O.O Horrifying.

Hmm..Good story so far.

Interesting beginnning.

Is this an SI? Normally I'd be flaming you...but this seems well-written. I'm conflicted. Therefore I shall keep reading.

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Great story

hi! me again, sorry about the short review before, the "post review" bit had me confused as i thought it would actually post it below the story. anyways, I really like this story, you two have a great wititng style. i've also just gotten up to date on "unexpected patanertity" (great story by the way) so I want to say good luck on your book, i reckon you could make it far. well, thats it from me!

i'm liking this so far!

This chapters fun!

I liked all the characters in it; the dragons riders and their relaionships are well developed I reckon

Could have been longer to give the characters more depth, but it was fun

Jealous of the telepathy; would have been fun to have heard more about exploring that; too short!

And I still don't like the mums voice; she just seems to create what the twins role in society is expected to be (eg. marriable, domestic chores) rather than being a seperate character herself

"You two are at marrying age and these men are very eligible. "

marrying age you girls are getting older,

men are very eligible these nobles are eligble men