A great story. Very good.

A beautiful father/daughter story. I could really sense the love Bail has for his daughter.

It's not often that a fic makes me cry, but this one did. You've crafted a truly unique and beautiful piece of writing here. Your grasp of the characters is excellent. It's nice to see a portrait of Bail in all his complexity, through the lens of his relationship with Leia.

Very nicely done. Added to my faves. :)

Blessings,
Fialleril

a story to put a smile on the face, touching and lovely:)

Aw, that was so cute! I normally don't really like Leia, but you have portrayed her and Bail really well. Congrats!