That was good, though I think more could have been done this it. I like though.

this was love.. the best TalaX Rei ever..

hmm nice way to seduce someone eh? i wanna know talas thoughts on this and how he fell in love in the first place.

LOL I LOVED UR STORY IT WAS SO cute in a way...Ray sure got some sleep now didn't he?
good job buddie ^_^

This story is amazing. It's like the story of my life...except without the massage and stuff...so basically just the crappy parts. xD Anyways, good story. I love Tala/Rei and Kai/Bryan. You had a couple grammar mistakes..but who really cares. This was just AMAZING. Great job ^_^ ASATS

It was kinda weird for me to read a Tala/Ray fic before cause I was so used to Ray/KAi which is getting on my nervs lately.I've checked your profile and OMG you write Tala/ray and KAi/Bryan!
Anyway.I liked this and enjoyed it very much^^
I'm going to check the rest of your stories in hope to find Kai/Bryan,lol

that was too cute really.im starting to gradually add tala/rei in my list of top pairings coz of wonderful authors like you.that was really nice!

OMG!This is one of the cutest and hottest Tala/Ray story I have ever read!!So you have the same problem as Ray? Probably wishing for Tala to be there.

I LOVE Tala/Rei stories! You always do an great job in doing that pairing. Please write more=)