I really like this story - well not a story really, more a chilling description. But somehow it totally fits Harry, especially in his 'depressed' phase in book 5. The only thing that could possibly be added is why he's there... or not, I think it works either way. To be honest, I know tons of people are all like "Update! Add to it!" but I think it's best as a oneshot - it's more haunting that way.
I love this!

wow this almost makes me cry and not much does that you should continur this with how he got ther or what happens if someone takes him from there?

This is so unique, its just so cool!

This is an excellent and roughly descripted story.
It's well written and the concept is brilliant.

Excellent.

One thing: "peaking" should be "peeking".

Interesting. Disturbing. Makes you wonder how many other children are discarded and hidden there too.

Nice image - but backstory is required here! Just a _little_ bit of expansion? Please?

This, although short, was creepy-cool.

I love it. Very vivid.

Wow...Nice. Now that I think about it, that is a really good explanation of where all the unwanted things go. Really touching and deep. It's intriguing(Sp?), and you should really expand on it. :-)

Azure Anei

wow ... umm i hope you plan to update and expand this story. its ... intriguing.

That was a touching story really. I liked it,the way that he thought himself unwanted. And just as you I wonder, where do all the things go to? One question though... How did Harry get there? Did he do the Evanesco spell on himself?

Are you continuing the story? Or was that it? Somehow, it gave me the chills. I would love to see it go further.

Wow. This is interesting. I can see the logic behind Harry being unwanted. The serpent was an interesting addition, too.

whoa! very powerful.

i never thought of it...but i can see him being discarded after the war was over. where would he go? of course, to where all unwanted things go. good job.