It was heartbreakingly beautiful. I don't know what to say. You're writing was simply incredible. Well done.

Brilliant

that was the best thing ever omg i loved loved loved it! exactly what i wanted to happen :)

It is stories like these that make me remember why I love Peter Pan so much. I can't believe I missed this before.

I loved the concept of this piece. You wrote it all out so well!

god so beautiful.

Lovely.

beautiful. i feel the nostalgia of youth lost, and the joy of youth forever retained.

i feel the sorrow of the mother losing their child, and the quiet joy of their being happy.

i feel the love of two souls, and the way childhood has it's way.

beautiful.

*pouts* It's pretty. Wendy and Peter get to be happy in this one. And somehow, I'm still thinking about that quote from your other fic, about how Peter Pan is a tragedy no matter what ending. Still, her mom not-quite-growing-old and letting go... it's an everyday tragedy, and you pulled off the hope and nostalgia perfectly... and I'll stop rambling now. *piles onto favorites yet again*

You have very nicely portrayed a mother's hopes, efforts, realisation, then acceptance. Lovely writing style. Some of the phrases you use are very effective and such as "June drips over Earth". A wonderful piece of writing. Keep up the good work.

Very well done, I really like the way you portrayed the mother, good work!

Aw, so cute!

That was absolutely beautiful.

I loved it.

This is beautiful..thank you for sharing it..

Soo hauntingly beautiful. I especially love your line at the end that begins with "But, perhaps.." and the piece's final line is great closure. Wonderful work!