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Watcherofsigmar
2009-08-21 . chapter 10
love it!

it nice to se a really well done bit of humor among the exploding orcs and squeeky geretchin of the 40k universe .

in the words of skwisgar, " being bleak and dark all of the time, sometimes loses the focus of being, you know, bleak and dark"
love this story an cant ait to see when chap 11 will be arriving.

keep up the good stuff bud

Watcher
Swords and Bandages
2009-06-24 . chapter 10
This story is absolutely killer. Always cheers me up.

Too much grimdark is not good for the heart. Light-hearted, irreverent reads like these are grand old remedies for whatever curve-ball disease life decides to infect you with...

I think the misspelling actually adds to the value of the story. If all these words were correctly spelled, it'll be lame... misspelled words add a nice quaintness to the story.

Hope you'll be writing more of these things.
The Lammynator
2009-05-21 . chapter 10
Bloody brilliant
Numbuh six-sixtysix
2009-03-22 . chapter 10
Brilliant story, with a very interesting perspective, and what must be a unique concept. Absolutely hilarious.
Teejay
2009-01-30 . chapter 10
A very good read. The only thing that detracts from it is the frequent spelling errors. Still, I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope that the 11th chapter is soon in coming.
Lord Mordaq Sevillate
2009-01-29 . chapter 10
I've been laughing my head off at this. It's a great story, serious but very funny all the way through. Can't wait for the next chapter. On another note, I'm amazed that there are other people that know about Bananna Sandwitches. It is a rather odd meal. LOL
DiomedesRex
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
This less-than-serious look at the Imperium and the world of Warhammer 40,0 moves smoothly from black humor to impish satire. I, for one, would enjoy seeing more of it.
Charles Bhepin
2008-10-30 . chapter 10
Ha! I love this story; the spelling errors don't really bother me all that much. What makes it all the more satisfying is that beyond the funny, there's the unconscious underlying theme that shows; can there be heroism without sacrifice? And that the only way to fight Grimdark is, of course, the Rule of Funny.

Much thanks, and more please.
Firethorn
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
Just referred to this story from another forum. Immediately hooked and had to read the whole thing. I'm looking forward to more.

I still love the inquisitor scene.
delta 38 blood raven
2008-10-22 . chapter 10
good chapter i like the knights sanguine parts, any chance to include the angry marines in the story?
Zombie Master
2008-10-22 . chapter 10
Hilarious just like the other chapters. Try to put a few more jokes in it and try to put a new philosophical question in every new chapter.
Harrison
2008-10-19 . chapter 10
These stories are hillarious I have just finished the tenth, please write more, how many are you actualy going to write?

Ypur biggest fan Harrison.
Lorin
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
Agh, Wheres the update?? Its all thats keeping me kinda sane at work :P
Kane
2008-10-09 . chapter 10
This is one of the funniest things I have ever read, though I'm sure you hear that often enough. If you don't, something is seriously wrong with everyone else.

One thing I have noticed is that you occasionally write 'acutely' as opposed to 'actually' or something. (Context doesn't make it certain, but I'm fairly confident that you didn't mean 'acutely'...)

Keep up the terrific/hilarious work.
Archie Owen
2008-10-05 . chapter 10
Incredible work, made me laugh so hard, please continue!
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