forget not to use this application. to review using this is so troublesome. anyway...do you count this 'serious fic'? you know, in my this fic is more humorous than 'embracing dreams', though i still love the latter fic the most. dont abandon this please?

the first review using opera mini 5! yay! anyway, the sasuke in this part, when he was brooding over his lost to gaara and naruto, was the worst impression of sasuke. he was so jealous and almost evil somehow. my boyfriends that none of them never ever liked sasuke's gut always made fun of him in front of my eyes, knowing well that they would get me pissed off and chasing after them. but sasuke's behaviour was somehow understanable considering the situation...err/ man! this sucks. the new series of opera mini just get the good look.

[giggle] i love it so cute

This story made me so happy. I'd been having a pretty bad day, slept in missed work, went on naturally. I went to re-read Embracing Dreams for the umpteenth time, and went to your profile. Now, I hadn't read this story in the past, because frankly, I didn't like the idea. The first chapter weirded me out, but caught my attention. The second chapter was mostly WTF a Kakashi clone?! The third and fourth OMG injuries and blood! 5-7? SQUE HEARTS. LOLOLOL. OMG GAARA+SASUKE HOTNESS. JEALOUS NARUTO. KISSING PROFESSIONALS. It made me smile. For that I leave this review for you with my thanks.

~Luna

OMG i love this story !!
Please ..
Please ..

Update soon !!

i really like this fic so far so please continue it! >_< PLEASE!

wahahahahaahahahahahahahaahahahahaahahahaahahah! soCOL! update!Update!UPDATE!

AW THIS STORY IS JUST TOO AMAZING...PLEASE UPDATE! heh tormenting Naruto and Sasuke is the bestXD

Ah is poor Naruto getting jealous? ;) I'm curious about the next challenges they'll face if any at all before the story is revealed.

Everything seems much hotter when Gaara's involved...;) But what are the 'things' outside? *cannot deal with cliffhangers*

The interaction between Sasuke & Naruto has been built-up really nicely so far - I admit I have a weakness for get-together stories with this pairing, and prefer the shift from friends to lovers to be gradual (both because they're quite young and because they are teammates). In this sense, your characters sound natural in the way they bicker and fight and try to make sense of their instincts/feelings. You also manage to keep up a fast-paced, funny dialogue despite having so many characters involved! *likes* :)

Aw... Naruto's jealous! Anyways, fantastic story so far. You're really good at characterization and character interactions. Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading the rest of it. Thanks for writing! :)

I like this, resienged and serious Sasuke, creppy Gaara, Naruto with his foot in his mouth: everything to make the perfect adventure/humor fic. You loose some clarity towards the beginning when the two Kakashi's are talking to each other. I, for one, was totally lost. But I was reading when I was very tired, so that could be part of it. I wonder what the fumes were, and how literally did Neji go insane?

You're right. This is really cracktastic, but really fun, too.

Although the end of the third chapter didn't really make sense to me. If you could . . . explain that, that'd be great.

YAY, you updated! Thank you! Wonderful chapter. I was laughing when Naruto kept objecting to anyone kissing Sasuke.


:D

Loved the chapter ^^
I really like all the reactions to he kissing, and even I was creeped out by Gaara. Can't wait for the next chapter