that was AMAZING!

its claire isn't it?/

JateJateJateJateJateJateJateJateJate
PLEASE!
~Mrs. CullenJonasJovi1901

DESMOND!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?! OMJS! (O My Jack Shepard!) This story is AMAZING!

ah! The shopkeeper is MICHAEL!?!?!?!?!?! The plot thickens!

LOVE your story!
~Mrs.CullenJonasJovi1901

I love it! Great story! up soon!

Yeah! Sequel! :)

great chapter!
aww im sad to see this finish :(
but i cant wait for the sequel :) and i'll miss you while your away ;) lol

x

I can't believe it's the last chapter already! Brill ending.
Holly x

Oh poor Jack! And I can't wait for the sequel! I've really loved this fic, it was so good, and I can't wait for more jateyness! I'll go check your profile now!

oh I'm so sad that the story is ending! I love this so much!

omg!! That's weird! great job!! :)

Great chapter and great cliffhanger as well!! I can't believe Jack got caught. I must say you did an excellent job with this fic, so I can't wait to read the sequel. I hope you have a great time off =D

Wow... I so wasn't expecting that! I thought the slip of paper was an address, but an address to a bad guy and Jack was really betraying Kate. This was def. good. I can't wait for the sequel!! Great job!!

NO WAI! NO WAI! NO WAI NO WAI NO WAI! You evil genius you! That was brilliant! Ha, I'm surprised I gave the fifth most amount of reviews, since I came in at like, chapter nine! BUT OHMYGOONESSYOUAREANEVILGENIUS! That blew my mind, and I can't wait for the sequel!