loving your imagery and character description. fantastic story. hope you update soon!

O.O Oh... Em... Eff... GE! o.o HOLY FUCKING SHIT! I LOVE THIS FANFIC! . RIKUxSORA FOREVER, DAMMIT! Along with AXELxROXAS! _ And I don't blame ya for making Sora look like a girl! ' I mean, Haley Joel Osment's voice in KH1 was REALLY FUCKIN' HIGH-PITCHED FOR A BOY! o.o I still can't BELIEVE how deep his voice got by KH2! o.o That was just, like, "WHOA!HOLY SHIT! o.o IS THAT REALLY HIS VOICE! DAMN! O.O" when I first heard Sora's voice! '

Intresting xP (that's allI have to say).

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This is a really dark story. I actually thought you made sora a girl! I've seen a few of those around

Poor Sora! Riku needs to take him home and show him what real love is! 3

-Jazu

Poor Sora!

I really liked all the description of the characters. Especially of what they did and y' know. Their background!

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haha, i love this story so far! I thought the same thing when I first played. Please update again soon!

'tis a good story...

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Wow! I am speechless (in a good way). You created an incredibly atomospheric piece; Dark, broody with a mean edge. Story is intriguing, hope you continue. Keep up the good work.

Yah, the first time I saw Sora I though he was a girl too. ;; Anywho... this was nice. I like your descriptions of all the characters. Poor Sora, hopfully Riku can help him out! ;D