omg I totally adore this story.. but when are you going to update it??

I just read all the 15 chapters today.. haha, that's something.. but I'd really like to know how everything ends.. and it's been kind of 2 months now, since you wrote something..

<3

misury )

Sorry it be so long, but I was saveing this for when I had time so that I can enjoy to the full! O and did I!

They are running away like Casey and Derek did? And the emotions in this chapter were jest so... And I like how you can tell that Callie and Tallis are Casey kids, Not jest by what they say, but by How they say it.

What the Hell is Casey up too? She IS up to something. I think she knows that with all that as been going on, that if she wnts to save her marriage, then she has to do something(anything at all!) NOW! Or it the end of Derek/Casey. She know Derek so well, that she knows that he thinking that they are horrible parents, and that they were/are "a mistake, and now we are paying the ultimate price". I also like to think that she know that Callie and Tallis well be OK as long as they are with the other, and is buy them time to get way, but that jest my.

I stell Love to see what the famly thank of all this. Thank you for all the work you put into your fict.

HEY I remember this story!
Oh, I'm so happy they found each other!
That's awesome :D
Thanks for updating!!
Ahahah, the 29 cats part made me laugh.

Wow. Casey and Derek are great parents, screwing each other while there children are missing.

Callie's monologue, And the wind brushed her skin with kisses of tingling laughter, it held her secret there too, and they were smiling at her, in that teasing kind of way.

They knew her happy reunion was fated to never last long., Casey's rant about kittens and shoes and Derek's reaction to her- everything was great. I love the chemistry you naturally write between Casey and Derek, they are funny and serious moments combined into one with love as the topping of the cake. I feel with Callie and Tally it's a little more forced. Yeah, they love each other- but I also noticed that it seems like you are trying to make them "pure soulmates" loving without flaws and so perfect that you have to wonder if they are human. I also question the wording you use during their addressing one another. Why does it sound as though they come from 1800s? Are they really that sophisticated? Really old souls? I love it because it puts that "historian romance" into play, but they are just kids at 15/16, so I wonder if it's really the right place to install that in there.

Regardless, I do love this story insanely much, I thought you died or gave up on it, but I'm happy to see you continue it. I know LWD FF is basically dead so this part of the site doesn't get much traffic, but please, for some of the fans that still cling on to the hopes to see you update, continue to do so. You are an amazing writer, and I hope for one day to see you publish something wonderful.

Oh.

MY.

God!!

They're together, right? I mean, they ran away, right? I LOVED it.

Derek and Casey got their groove back too! yiipiie!

That doesn’t mean I care for him in that way, I’m just so use to him is all. Right? I love Talis with all my heart and my love for him cannot be surpassed by any other attachments or simple feelings for anyone else, right?

…

…Right?


AH! Talis and Callie forever! you can't DO this! They must be together, oh, I think iwould die if they didn't end up together!

Oh, poor Derek! God, your chapters leave me speechless. I see you updated so I'm trying to get through all these chapters to see what happens, I'm ont he edge of my seat!

Aw YAY!
... Sso has Casey gone nuts or is she tryin to buy time for the kids and enjoy her time with Derek?
She cracked me up with the cats.
Poor Tally! Cassie was scarin me!!
Great job!
~Crystal

WOW. You updated. (= (this is still LanaLangKent, I just have a different username nowadays)
This chapter has a beautiful full-circle quality; it reeals that Casey and Derek forgot who they were, and Talis and Callie ended up running away just like Casey and Derek did way back when.

I love how strong both Callie and Tallis's emotions were, and the image of panic in Tallis when he thought Callie had caved to society's pressure and went onto Sammy , but how Callie then had a burst of strength and they find a way to run away together.
The poetic interlude is beautiful, as always. (=
I also like how you displayed Talis's sardonic edge towards his father, espescially knowing Derek is sort of being a hypocrite, and this being the moment where Talis just breaks down and decides to take fate into his own hands.

KEEP THIS STORY ALIVE, and don't say you don't have talent, because this is AMAZING!

loved it update soon

why arent you updating?
i am obsessed with this story and need more.
please continue writing, you are gifted. truly.

Oh my, how I love Sammy. I feel so insanely bad for him! He loves Callie and I think she feels something for him but her love for Talis is too much!

She thinks, if only in another world, in another time, I could love you like you love me.

that was so sad, so awesome, too

Your whole life, you can be told something is wrong and so you believe it.

Would anyone truly question it? A life of lectures, a life of moral understandings embedded in to adolescent brains so when they are older they can peacefully conform?

But slowly, moments that transcend time, a look, a smile, a feeling, in the pit of your stomach…slowly, one by one, the feelings arise and overwhelm, and change you. Change your view. Change, nothing, and yet everything.

These feelings, these moments, these forces of nature, so rightfully named; Love, Trust, Kindness, Longing, Wanting, Desire, Need, Despair, Spirit, and Soul Mate. By the time they reach your mind, the old logic is dead, the understanding of what was once right or wrong, gone, vanished.

And maybe, in that moment, one might realize, it was never really there at all. What do we know beyond what we feel in the end?


Wy... would you do this to us? - too beautifula nd sad for words.

Wow.

Her body had stopped shaking and it hung in the air.

I know everything about you.

We were so alone now.

WOW.

How... haunting. How echiliriating. I never knew such words could exist and such a feeling take place in my heart, that way too intense, I think I need a break from reading this or I might just explode.