I'm giving you my honest opinion on this story.

It's great but it's more of a summary then a story, I beleive it should be made into a chapter story.

It's great it really is.

Not bad, not bad at all. Keep rightin' and u'll go far. Don't wory 'bout flames. Cal it somethin' 2 build on, ye? Or a bunch of people who dont kno wat a good story is. Ur choice completely. I dont pay any attention 2 those who rite crap about how the story was suckish. 'Cause I dont give a f* 'bout them, ye?

Like I said, keep writin' and u'll go far.

dude i love this it is awesome!

that's a really nice "drabble" u should write more stuff like this!

-cho-

I wish all loves lasted like that,, we can dream..

cool i like it.

The weasel and the cherry blossom. XD Weasel just sounded funny. Well, that was prettyful. Not the best ever, but still nice.