i like how you wrote this (i like your writing style in general, actually), but...i am so. confused. ... wait, WHAT? can you please explain...? starting with the whole deal with echizen. XD

Oh, that's so sad.

That was really good.
I liked the twist you but at the end.
good Job.
Vampire of the Bloody Rose.:)

you have managed to give me an idea for my story thankyou!

That...was fantastic. *is rendered speechless* When I found out Ryoma was dead, the kiss blew my mind (because of course THAT is the first thing I think of) and the apology after it made sense, and the "I would have wanted to play you for real, I think." and the lack of warmth in the hug and the...and the and the XD
-rants-

In conclusion...See these pants I'm wearing? Me neither, 'cuz they were just blown across the room.

Oh my gosh.. This was amazing. I would say more, but I'm afraid I would just keysmash all over.

dude...he saw a ghost? or wat? really confusing story. somehow i understand it. but i'd like to know your perspective of what's going on. What was behind this story?

oh...god...wow...i SO was not expecting that...oh wow...speechledd with shock...wow...

did Tezuka actually think ryoma was real then?

Oho. Spooky. Nice. ...after I read 'Shiraishi' I swear I started freaking. Because whenever I find that in a fic, I know it has to be bad. >< AND I WAS RIGHT.

It was well written, of course! :D

Wow. Confusing.

But I think I get it.

Nevertheless, I'm going to read it again.

Because...it's hard to grasp the concept of the ... hallucination... thing...

Aie, Cool story.