I liked it. Very sad

Blackrose, I'm afraid I simply didn't feel this one. For some reason, it failed to stir in me the emotional pang that "A Glass Rose" and "Closure" did. Perhaps it was the wording or the way Kurama simply remained montone? Hope I could help.

~Koky

This was so perfectly Yuusuke and Kurama! I could picture the entire scene as it unfolded and I still say, you must have the ability to channel Kurama because you write him so well. And Yuusuke... just the right mix of brash, cocky arrogance tinged with loyalty and love for his friend! BRAVA, my friend, BRAVA!!

I'm so happy that you're back! Don't worry about the tense disagreements, I didn't even notice them. Also, I think this was really good. I really liked the parallelism with the beginning and "How? Now, there is the question.", it was a nice touch.

You're an excellent writer, so don't ever say otherwise.

Now that you say that, you're right. I hadn't thought of it. o.o But, wow... violent and sad. Very much so. :( I missed your writing! I need to re-read that... But this was very well written, Blackrose!