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Reviews For: DragonFable: The Darkness that Lies Within

eyelovefantasy
2008-06-09
ch 2,
abuseCertainly is an intriguing story; I wouldn't mind seeing the end. ;)
Sakura-chan 484
2008-06-03
ch 2,
abuseHi! I read your story so far and I think it's good I always wanted to someone write a story on the war. And if you'd like you can use my character.

ID: 7392401

Anyways keep up the good work!
Moonlight Memories
2008-05-13
ch 2,
abuseVery nice. Update soon!~
crazyrTHANu882
2007-07-16
ch 1,
abuseI like the story, update soon, you can use my character in the war

ID#:3005083

Mages are are the bestest :P
Doubutsu-lover
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abuseI really love it.
Reversed Blade
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abusePretty Good, really liked it. But you should write more chapters soon. If you want to use my guys you could.

Ulfor/1605767

Darius/9554198
general-tommy
2007-05-01
ch 1,
abusenice work...could use some work on it though

tip: only one person may speak in a paragraph

(if you want, you can add my character to the war, ID number is 1023897)
Moonlight Memories
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abuseNot bad, I loved it.Keep it up! I hope to see more!
Rae-scars adorn me
2007-04-23
ch 1,
abuseI like it. ^^ All you need to do is update. Which you might have to do two chapter because the war is over and **.
Magic-Noise
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abuseOoh, very nice story. I play Dragonfable too, rogues are better though...Heh. Just kidding. Anywho, looks good. I was thinking about writing about the war, but you beat me to it. [sigh] Still. In the begginning, the paragraphs were kinda unorganized, but it looks good so far. I hope you continue soon, I'd like to see where you go with it. [smiles]

-Julius/Magic-Noise
carlo707
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abusenice story keep it up

carlo707: hey I was going to take that egg

lord malikous: no way I'm having the last egg

Lord carlo:(snatch it) see ya I'm taking it

those came from dragonfable adding author in list
The known author
2007-04-07
ch 1,
abuseI like it so far, keep it going. If I were you I'd just go with whatever the site puts on and put the event in your own way.
Cori Rain
2007-04-05
ch 1,
abuseHm...what about being attacked by a dragon? I'll lend mine if you want her. Oh Tira!

Tira: I can't belive you turned me into a dragon...

me: Would you rather be a live breating dragon or a dead fairy queen...ghost person.

Tira: The latter.

Me: okay. *turns another carrie into a red and black dragon.* This is Samantha aka Sam. She controls darkness, potals, and can control peoples minds. Perfect for Artix to defeat.

Sam: Cori! I sware when Cosmin finds out abbouth this...

me: He won't do anything. Remember I cained him up and locked him in the attic and surrounded him with force feilds and other saftey things. Your Vampire boyfriend isn;'t going anywhere. So be a good little dragon or I'll lock you up somewhere too.

Ssm: yes mam.
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