Wow. That was very simple yet somehow really powerful. It felt perfectly in character, and like what we would have seen had the camera been with them instead of Jack and what not.

And that last line, "We’ll be fine, we survived the crash, and we’re not going to die here." managed to choke me up instantaneously, so well-done! Haha.

I really, really liked this. I always thought Shannon had a lot of potential too, and she was also one of my fav characters. GREAT fic!

Red

Oh, the irony :). Is this a one-shot? I hope not! It's lovely. I like the way your write, and how your portrayed Shannon and Boone. I miss Shannon.

aw! that was really good. i never really liked shannon that much but i hated the fact that she died so young on the island. i wish that they gave her a bit longer to live! but great oneshot! beautiful writing and i loved the way you added boone in!

That's so sad! He says there not going to die here and they do! They both do! I liked Shannon! I didn't like that they killed her off. Locke on the other hand...if only they would kill him!

I loved Shannon too. I really miss her character. Great story! I really liked it. ;D Keep making fanfics because you're so good at it!

aah! last line irony!

this is really cool... during the first few episodes, she's totally made out to be a stuck up kid, but you did a good job telling otherwise :)