 lemon-rind 2009-09-02 . chapter 1laughed at that last bit. nice job! |
 Taku 2008-11-05 . chapter 1 This turned out to be too quick. Kinda like a short video clip. you should have added something a little after like a morning after and the blurry memory of gasping or something. just a little more something to extend. |
 n.n 2007-06-12 . chapter 1 coolio, funny too |
 Lotos-Eater 2007-04-09 . chapter 1Oh man.
If I wasn't such a hopeless ShikaTema shipper, this pairing would have had me at hello.
I love awesome crack. Please keep writing awesome crack. |
 Billy Rose 2007-04-08 . chapter 1ah, so Temari was hangin' around them for Ino, eh?
clever girl ^_^
kick ** fic |
 nwfairy 2007-04-07 . chapter 1hehehe ^^ I like it ^^ |
 12343221 2007-04-06 . chapter 1I loved it. I bet Shika would be a bad boyfriend too. -_- He seems like it. Please write more stroies. |
 Kitsune Kit 2007-04-06 . chapter 1That rocked! |
 SugarhighsP 2007-04-06 . chapter 1Amazing, like always. :)
~Jessica |
 trombonista 2007-04-06 . chapter 1 I love InoTema! This was such a great one-shot! |