Absolutely amazing. You did a spectacular job. I can't tell you how much I love this. It was so really and down to earth. I love Sakura. She is very grown up and sexy. I like how you made Deidara more human by describing his emotions and insecurities. Kisame is great to. He's like the annoying older brother that you can't help but admire. This is definitely a very creative story. Some parts hit pretty close to home for me, but it was so refreshing. I love it! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more of your work!

such an awesome, awesome story

*flys off into the sunset wiping away tears*

its so beautiful,i cant wait to read it all

Hey, I love your story. I am reading it for the second time. The plot is orginal and the beginning drew me in from the start. I look foward to your other stories.

It's not nice making people cry! But I love this story, every chapter of it! :)

omg i love this story so much i want you to know its on my top fave list (in my head atleast) ! ^_^
<3

So amaziingly and beautiifully wriitten...wow ^_^ ii luved iit so much :D

Thiis chapter was very deep...ii got a liil teary eyed there...

Omg! Funny chapter! Very..kinky xD

Go Dei and Saku =D

LILY xoxo

I TRUSTED HIM!! Jerk.

DeiDei is one of my fave chars..and I'm reading ch 3 atm. Amazing story so far!

I should have expected DeiDei to do something like this..He might be cute, and almost a more mature Tobi/Madara but...He's still part of the Akatasuki, and he's evil~

xoxo Lily

Wow...that's some driink...

How akward...playiing games 'naked' wiih the akatsukii lolz

Beautiifully done Sakura ^_^

Ii actually trusted hiim iin the begiiniing...wat a shock that was when he knocked her out...

*glomps Deidara* soo kyute & hott!
WOW this is probably my favorite chapter so far.
*_* I can't wait to read the rest =D

~Bae

good end