 piyo-no-kizu 2007-07-03 . chapter 1WOW! Thanks for writing this~ It's so fun to read your work! Really original and creative ne!~ ^^; Hmm.. in the end, I felt that both of them were in wrong and they were in weird moods that day. lol Sasuke shouldn't have carried after Naruto told him to stop and Naruto shouldn't have given Sasuke burnt toast.
ZOMG. Are trees octopus fake? O__O I thought they were real. >__> Now, Naruto cannot be judged 'dumb' just because he THOUGHT tree octopus WERE real. lol. Neways, well done! And remember to update 'Law and Order soon' for us readers if you have time ok? |
 Aaida-harplakE 2007-04-20 . chapter 1God, before I begin with the review. I’m terribly sorry about the delay. I didn’t have enough Internet time to leave a review in the holidays XD (I know this sounds so lame)… gosh. I really hope you will forgive me ;_:? (crying a river)
But all that aside, I LOVE THIS! I love this a bit too much (has been reading it over and over again) XD;
I’m a fluff girl, completely smitten by the very real scenarios, ones I can perfectly image. The whole Sasuke and Naruto interaction is really well done. They are just like real people not characters on paper, unlike what some writers tend to make them a little unrealistic, you made them solid. Often in real life, serious arguments explode from small things and factures built up from doubts and suspicions. Although both Naruto and Sasuke love each other very much, like all couples when they love each other so much everyday seems like a honeymoon. During the ‘honeymoon’ they skip through all the questionable aspects of the other half. Instead of asking the other, clarifying the doubts, they tend to ignore or forgive the other secretly. It’s all fine and dandy, but by building it up, if something happens and catches both party on a stubborn day, all hell break lose. But since they both love each other so much, an apology can be made eventually.
Serious, Sasuke defines sex. Naruto, you should know this very well. XD And more sex means happier Amy X3 (I should listen to myself, so honey sounding.)
OMG, and comes the bits when friends arrive *0*! I’m in love. I completely love the interaction between Sarge and Kiba XD; Hilarious! And when you wrote about Sai and me TT_TT OMG; I was hugging the computer screen by the end. I squealed too, good thing no one’s at home at the time.
XD I’m small yo! All my friends are actually around the same height as me, so I never really felt small… until I met Rosie, a girl 3 years younger than me and is already a head taller XO, then she brought her boyfriend around X_X. They are giants! I’m actually considered tall for Chinese people, believe it or not o_O;
But I like being small, it gives off an air of cuteness. I want to be cute (whines)!
When I was reading the bit with Sarge and me I can’t help but wish you were there too! I was imagining Sarge phoning you up or something. But then if all three of us were present then there’d be no peace! Sasuke and Naruto will be doing X-rated things in a flash and the rating of this fic’ll be M for sure X3;
I’m a pervert coz I read perverted fanfics XwX. It’s all you nasty (wonderful) fanfic writers’ fault for corrupting my mind! Serious I learnt most of the birds and bees with fanfics… (in denial).
Basketball, my favourite sport! I used to really love playing it, but when I changed school it wasn’t offered anymore ;_; instead we have netball (it’s so stupid!!).
I like your explanation of Sai’s reason for thinking basketball is sexually frustrating. When I was reading it, I thought he meant the fact that with basketball you want to get the ball into a net. With the whole ‘hole’ thing and the ‘ball’ into a hole XD
OMG. And the hole is not that large, so it’s a tight fit >)
WHEN DID I BECOME SO NAUGHTY!?!?!!
Oh, and Gaara, so typical X3 so cute! They have beachball in the Olympics; so he’s just gonna wait for next year 2008 Olympics at Beijing then XD (thumbs up)!
God I love Sarge’s bantering with Kiba.
And then they made up. It made my heart warm X3! SASUNARU FOREVER!
LOVE you a lot for everything you’ve done for me. No words can express my gratitude to you… so I’m gonna dance for you! XD (joking) You are a wonder girl. |