Ah... short, beautiful and exact. =)

Oh... that was so cute!

Though some of the sentences didn't really make that much sense...It was still so cute!

I like the story.

That was really lovely, and sort of confusing at the end. It gives a sort of angst to it. The ending was especially wonderful.

That was adorable. It really made my heart weep. I actually think you got a good idea of Train and Saya. I don't think they're in love or anything, but it could have appeared that way.

Interesting. :nod: I don't usually read TrainSaya, but yours is good. I'd try not to use phrases over and over again, and try varying your sentence structure in the future. :3 I'd try and use something other than just pronouns to refer to the characters, even if you're avoiding using names. Other than that, it's really good and cute.