 Ktjn 2007-04-06 . chapter 1You are an 'Ashe-Al-Cid with a touch of Basch for flavor' fic GENIUS! And you always keep it hanging at the end, just enough for the audience, namely me, to want MORE.
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 The Blearing Phoenix 2007-04-06 . chapter 1Mithrigil,
I love this, I love this. Al-Cid is so charming, so witty, so darned intellectual. I love how he communicates with Ashe, it's as if they understand each other on a whole different plain -- on a whole different level. Their relationship is a fruitful one -- full of hunger for thought, for touch, and the desire to communicate with each other.
I could actually sense some raw, real emotion in this but your words only truly come alive when you read them outloud. For when you actually read them to yourself -- you actually feel the fleshed out emotion behind them . The realness behind it all and the careful work the author took to write this just shines through every story you write.
It was beautiful and you put Penelo in perfectly, nothing about her seemed out of place or odd to me. You have a way with sewing words together.
Beautifully done.
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