please continue the story

The new Team Rocket duo seems quite interesting.

Can't wait till the next update!

ContestShipping forever!

-Setsuna

i love it all

please UPDATE faster i am dying to know what comes next.

please add more romance :3

take care

wow thats really good for your first fan fic! Better than mine at least...lol (:

You got me hooked! I'm gonna read the story 'til the end, and I love your description details. Keep it up, and can't wait to hear you for future stories ]

Love it, your story was really great. 5 stars. Please update soon.

Very good fanfic

but should put more description and also romance More good fic Congratulations

Att: DSRP2401 (THE abbreviation for my nickname)

And for God Is My Forguive My English Is Bad But Im From South americas' Exactly Venezuela And Here the language is Spanish

Wow...it felt like forever since I've read this, I knew Drew would get Cyndaquil! :3

Midnight

update soon!

-sparklezz

awsome so far.

update soon.

Grea:Hi! Love the story!

Blaze:I love the fight scenes! Clever with the names. Awesome how Snorelax evolved. I like Snorelax better than Munchlax but they're both good.

Blastria:The interactions are great! I can't wait to see how they meet up later.

Empress:No mistakes that I can see, good work.

Freja:I'm a bit sad that Totadile didn't get picked but alright. I LOVE IT!

Grea:Keep up the great work! Until Next Time...

Pokemon:See Ya!

that was such a good chapter! i loved it! i can't wait for the next one! :D

condawg1

yay update and new pokemon! it'd be kind of funny if may had somehow gotten a charmander, though... then she'd have all the starters! lol update soon!

all i have to say is wow

i didn't love it, I ADORED IT plz write more and check out my stories

Really great story!

Squee! I saw your fic on serebii, but i noticed that it was on ffn as well _ I've read all 15 chappies in one night! I really like your story so far, i hope that you will continue your fic :) If you're busy, no rush..I do the same thing too lmao...I haven't updated my stories in a year! :P