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| butterfly100 2008-01-27 ch 9, | abusehey nice chapter cant wait for more |
| karen147145 2008-01-26 ch 9, | abuseWOHO And update. Sorry i am really happy now, you have just made my day. :D:D:D:D I hope Electra and Wyatt end up actually getting married and that Ryan guy gets his ** vanquished, and same for Nadia lol. Anyway another get chcapter and i love this story. |
| deanna3 2008-01-26 ch 9, | abusehey...its been a while but worth it lol...i dont know what changed but ur writing skills have improved...u leave nonsense like outfit description out and instead fosuc on writing what's important...and another thing, how can u switch points of view like that? I mean now it's Electra's then DJ's I could never pull that off lol...sth really must have happend lol, not that I dont liked the way u write before but now u just get to the point...short chapter, that's what I thought but then again every chapter seems short cos I enjoy it...ever thought about writing a story involving Chris as a main character? I mean I love Wyatt, especially ur Wyatt but Chris has always been my favorite...anyway great chapter, congrats and update soon |
| EmSyd 2008-01-26 ch 9, | abuseAwesome. |
| karen147145 2008-01-03 ch 8, | abuseHey as i said in my last review i love your story and i cant wait for an update to see what happens next in this story. |
| butterfly100 2007-12-08 ch 8, | abusehi this is addictive and is definatly one of my favorite fanfics ever. hope you update very soon |
| EmSyd 2007-08-20 ch 8, | abuseFantastic. Can't wait for more. |
| deanna3 2007-08-19 ch 8, | abuseaw...I hate it that Wyatt treats her like this but I guess its understandable...I really liked this chapter cos it was focused more on their internal conflicts as well as their relationship which is kinda changing I guess...did I ever tell u what a good job ur doing with Wyatt? I mean, he's evil but someone u make it seem ok to be evil lol, he appears to be this good guy with morals and all and somehow he's still evil, its weird but u did a great job...so congrats and update soon. |
| Blackangle2011 2007-08-19 ch 8, | abuseGood chapter. Update soon |
| EmSyd 2007-08-10 ch 7, | abuseFantastic. Can't wait for more. |
| Blackangle2011 2007-07-30 ch 7, | abuseThis chapter was really good. Im looking forward to the next one =) |
| Blackangle2011 2007-07-30 ch 6, | abuseI bet its ryan |
| karen147145 2007-07-21 ch 7, | abuseLove this story i really do. You never really no whats gonna come next. I love that fact and i LOVE THIS STORY!! so carry on with the story and dont give up on it. |
| deanna3 2007-07-19 ch 7, | abuseomg..u cant end a chapter like that lol...well not u have to update soon soon soon...aw, poor electra cant believe wyatts treating her like this..but definitely a good chap, I was glad to see that electra gave that boy to chris...so update soon lol cos I just cant wait to find out what wyatts up to and not only wyatt but ryan and nadia too...so congrats. |
| deanna3 2007-07-12 ch 6, | abusehey...sry i didnt get to review your las chapters but I was away and yeah lol..but I cann see a lot of interesting things happened and I gotta say it intrigues me to see what this ryan has planned, especially since nadia's in this too and chris too?hmm, wonder what he has to do with all of this...and I predict a lot of problems for the couple, I wonder if the wedding's gonna happen or not...oh well great job so congrats and update soon cos the suspense's killing me lol. |