Not a bad story at all! Good work on every aspect of it, not many stories can make me want to sit through this much text lol, but somehow it wrapped me into it. Very good job.

Not bad so far

You know that Hinata has bigger breast then Sakura right?

Great story! I loved your idea and the crossover. It was Taka' suggestion to read this and I'm glad he mentioned you. The thing I like most about your work is when you randomly put yourself into the story, that's funny. The 7-girl orgy was kinda wierd but funny. Your unique characters are also pretty awesome, especially Saphira and the guide to becoming a dictator for little girls. Great work!

Great fic.
Also, theres one more Leena. In the Paragraph that starts "Reena hated Kurenai." Fourth line from the bottom, fourth word in the line.

i wish you would still write. i have ap classes that i never study for and i waste time on this site every chance i get! Howeve, i understand, i think i'm failing chemistry (lol), and you'll probably never read this anyway!

this was AWWSOME! i cant wait to read more.

*Is slightly confused* Kiora is alive...but in some other universe...and shes been empregnated with Kohana's child...*shakes his head* You two are did a good job on this help wanted thing, but I is curious as to what became of Kiora? Does she ever come back? Or does Natsuko go on living in pain for the rest of her life..tho this is merely a fanfic and the characters are not real, I cannot help but feel sorry for Natsuko...she lost the love of her life and Tsunade lost a sister/friend. I would appreciate an answer to my questions and once more, I look forward to reading more from you.
~Akai

Bravo! Bravo indeed! A wonderful end to a gripping and thirlling fanfic. You seriously had me getting upset when Tsunade and Kurenai almost died, but you didnt kill them which means I keep reading and dont flame you =P. With your permission, I'd like to put a link to this fic up in my profile as I have done with other fics that sucked me in. I look forward to reading more work from you in the future and hope that anything else you may come up with is as brilliant as this.
~Akai

bout damn near gave me a stroke with your last chappy >.> *makes mental note to get revenge* It's good to see the girls back together again I sneeked a peek at the final chapter thats posted to see if they both lived and I couldnt understand a damn thing there XD. I must go read more now.
~Akai, the insane reviewer

YOU MONKEY FUCKING EVIL BASTARD! IF YOU KILL KURENAI OR TSUNADE I WILL FUCKING FLAME YOUR ASS INTO THE GROUND! NO MORE CLIFFIES FOR THE LOVE OF THE FOURTH, NO MORE CLIFFIES!

I warned you! *finishes making handsigns* Fire Style, Hellfire Dragon Justu! (patent pending) *Draws sword from his back and shoots a giant black flaming dragon from it towards you* They made/make such a cute couple and its really hard to see em break up =( get em back together soon okies?

No! They cant break up! I wont allow it! *makes handsigns* If they dun get back next chappy, there will be a giant flaming black dragon coming after you XD. Just ask Shkamaru15, he knows the wrath of my dragon =P

If it winds up as Tsunade or Kurenai, or thier parents who die...there will be hell to pay. Fair warning =P

14 years later and Kabuto is still a freaking prick...*wonders how this will turn out*