How very cute! I'm surprised though that the status is 'complete' as it feels like it could continue. I certainly wouldn't be adverse to that. There's still many questions left unanswered. ^_^

"Kagome was furious, however, and demanded that they let her go before she was scared away" --um... I don't think KAGOME is the furious one here. ;) Might want to fix that. Other errors were relatively simply and apparently among fanfics rather common --just mixed words or mixed spellings & the like.

All in all very fun! I'm subscribing just in case. ;) Thanks for writing!

that was awesome

Is this story no longer being updated? >.> I really, really like it.

its cute. I really like it. I just kind of wish it was at least a little longer.

Kawaii!! Adorable!! I

o...where can i get those flavoured, edible bubbles?!anyway, what a cute story!

I love this story! It's so adorable. :)

Are you planning on continuing?

this was such a cute oneshot, but i want more. so how does kurama react to kagome being a time traveling miko with an adopted kitsune son? does kagome know he's a demon? how will kurama find out kagome's a miko, how about have kagome save him from the demon. how does koenma react? please write more

this is so awesome!
please update!

So cute! This time it's on a sunny day instead of a rainy one! I liked the idea of the flavored bubbles! Shippo is so adorable in this story! ^_^
(ahem- I know its weird to review both chapters when the second chapter was there- but I just had to comment on both chapters...)
I'll keep an eye out for more chapters, even if you don't do a sequel! ^_^

Nice! This was a pretty funny story- it made me laugh so hard! I really liked how you incorporated Shippo in this story! ^_^ This was really cute and well written, I encourage the idea of a sequel! Good luck if you decide to do so!

please update soon!

aw! too cute! i love the little game and the whole thing with Shippo and Kurama was sweet! just lovely.
-OhBrother

I heard about this fic from SadBrokenWings and wanted to read it, it's really good! Hope you update soon and I'll be sure to review this fic for sure if you do, okay? Buh-bye!

*snicker*
Since its reached a checkmate, when's the rematch?
I wanna read more! Encore!