 Sunshine 2009-04-11 . chapter 6 Hi. I just read this on fanfic and was searching aroound for the rest of the parts to see that part 6 was the latest. As on the update was 2007 and you had this blog, I thought it was best if I write a review here and now I've added it here as well.
I came into Lazytown fanfic just recently-don't know why, curious what was available. I have to say that this is the only fic, for me, that really stands out. Not only is it completely different, but includes alternate world and selves(my fave scenario!. But the biggest positive for me is the style of writing. You are on the ball with descriptions without going overboard and the lines for each character are spot on. I like the differences coming out,Sportacus and his stubborness to listen, Ziggy and a warrior and the similarities like Pixel and his wisdom (BTW I love how you have written Pixel here given him true justice). Amongst all this character development is the impending war which brings in this tension on Stephanie to solve this matter. It leaves me wondering what will happen next-will she actually sneak out to see Robbie? If she does will she get caught etc? The possibilities...I do find myself checking the various places I have found this fic to see if it has been updated:) Thanks for the start of an fascinating tale.
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 Nephisa 2008-11-13 . chapter 6The story seems to be coming along great and it would be nice to read more about the adventures of Stephanie.. |
 maxiefae 2008-10-09 . chapter 6please go on |
 MicWhite10 2008-01-09 . chapter 6awesome story! i love it, please please update!! |
 NeverEverFaceTheDark 2007-12-18 . chapter 6MORE...MORE... *drool* XD
please write on!!
it is so different from the normal lazytown stories!
and very well written...conclusion: just great! :) |
 Pegasus63 2007-08-13 . chapter 6fun story - Looking forward to more. |
 flowerpower1234 2007-07-12 . chapter 6OMG please finsh! Very cool story and I like the world its in but please finish :) |
 Halfpastdead001 2007-06-25 . chapter 6o keep going !1 |
 AliciaElizabeth 2007-06-10 . chapter 6o good story i hope you update soon! |
 gemma 2007-06-08 . chapter 6 WOW! i LOVE this story, it's full of adventure, mystery, love, humour, everything, you are a genius,
i really hope stephanie can change sport's mind, i couldn't imagine sportacus going to war! |
 18lzytwner 2007-06-08 . chapter 6Oh no. If she goes to Robbie then they'll think her a traitor. Not good. Great update! :) |
 Vensert 2007-06-05 . chapter 5 Good fic. I'm wondering what exactly happened between Sportacus and Stephanie in the past. |
 18lzytwner 2007-04-19 . chapter 5Oh man! That close to Sporty and she had to turn him down. That has to hurt. Robbie a king? Oh dear. :) |
 Poohbear98366 2007-04-17 . chapter 5Hehe, poor Steph. What a pickle you're in, eh? Looking forward to more, as always. Good Chapter. |
 Nina Davis 2007-04-16 . chapter 5I can't get enough of this story. Please! Don't stop!
A big hug! |