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loretta537
2007-08-30 . chapter 5
this is good, i wonder what akito will do next.
Kikyohater220
2007-04-13 . chapter 5
Hey nice story. Have 2 finish it. By the way thanks 4 putting my story as 1 of ur favs.

Inuyasha's Heart. ^-^Kikyohater
PurpleHime
2007-04-09 . chapter 5
aw!! that really is sweet! they all care about her and she truly is the luckiest girl in the world! anyway, can't wait for the sequal! i'm sure anything you write will be cute@
PurpleHime
2007-04-09 . chapter 4
evil evil evil!! akito's so mean!! gr... i hope they get outta there soon! none of them deserve this!
kyoshigurelover
2007-04-08 . chapter 5
aww how sweet! I really liked this story. I really do hope you'll write a sequel! here's some constructive criticism;
try to make your stories longer. a little bit of characterization and detail can go a long way. also, try not to update so fast. give your readers a little suspense and keep them waiting for more.

other than that, great job! I'm excited for future fanfics from you! I'm putting you on my fav authors list!
mewsakura1
2007-04-08 . chapter 5
That was a great ending! But i couldn't help but think you could of dragged it out a little longer, you know, given it more suspense, put more of the characters in danger, maybe get a few more people locked in that little room of akito's. oh well, que serra serra. (oh...I sound like Shigure, heh heh...)
mewsakura1
2007-04-07 . chapter 1
:K YOU MUST UPDATE! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! ...plese put up chapter 4 son...
Kristy Kitten
2007-04-07 . chapter 3
they have to save her
kyoshigurelover
2007-04-07 . chapter 3
ah what a cliffhanger lol awesome chapter. I hope they can save her!
JennyKim319
2007-04-07 . chapter 3
I wonder if they'll find Tohru still in there, and if they do how they'll react...
JennyKim319
2007-04-07 . chapter 2
I wonder if they'll ever find out where she's at. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
PurpleHime
2007-04-07 . chapter 2
omg.. that room must be cursed too! freaky room... i hope kyo and the others find her soon! they have to save her! update as soon as you can!!
PurpleHime
2007-04-07 . chapter 1
akito's so mean!! gr... i hope he doesn't hurt her! i love this so far! great job! on to next chapter!
kyoshigurelover
2007-04-06 . chapter 2
that was great!! seriously... you definitely did not disappoint me! I loove the fact that Hatori didn't go against Akito despite the fact that he felt really bad for doing that to Tohru... it was really in character. great job! I'm interested to see what Yuki does when he realizes Tohru's in his old room...
Ichigo Mirai
2007-04-06 . chapter 1
good
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