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Kayrana
2008-07-24
ch 5,
abuseDamn deleted my review while sending it...

Where is the hero in these bad fics? How would they survive a NORMAL monster attack?

Cid would be pawing at every female around, Aerith would be trying and failing to get more gray matter from Yuffie's skull, Cloud would try to decide betwen Tifa and fighting, Tifa would win, Red XI would be off chasing birds some where since he hadn't been called yet, Vincent would complain that the sun was ruining his mood, and Barret would top it off by being the reason for the attack in the first place. The monster wouldn't have bothered attacking, but what in the world could that shiny human-shaped thing be?
BananaPeaceMonkey
2008-03-23
ch 8,
abuseYou know, you guys make some excellent points.

I wonder if I did any of that stuff . . .

Hope not, didn't mean to.

Check for me?

Just kidding, but this was really good anyway.
Cedarville
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuse"...not a limp-dicked girly-man who probably sleeps with hair curlers."

Hilarious. Fucking hilarious. I came up with my own word for this type of character, can be used for multiple characters, not just Cloud, but I'll use him as an example.

WailingVagina!Cloud

or just

wv!cloud.
VulcanElf
2008-02-21
ch 8,
abuseSo true! I can't count the number of bad fics I've come across in which Cid is shamelessly sticking it into whichever one of the women holds still long enough.

I mean, really? Being a foulmouthed chainsmoker is *really* tantamount to being a serial rapist?

I'm loving all of these. Keep them coming.
Kaj-Nrig
2008-02-11
ch 8,
abuseHere's to not reading anything of yours until now. (At least nothing I can remember.)

This's some good reading. I enjoyed it. Quite thoroughly, at that. Maybe it was a bit on the no-no side, since I was grinning like an idiot in a college library, but hey, who cares.

I liked the Vincent one most. Caricature it may be, but a funny as hell caricature it is. Zombie Aerith one may be a close second, but then again, a lot of them would be close for second.

Ciao, and good luck on whatever other nonsense you're working.
NRGburst
2008-02-01
ch 8,
abuseLoved this! Note to self: Very dangerous for the keyboard when eating soup while reading hilarious fic.
Faves!
Le Pecore Nere
2008-01-30
ch 8,
abusehahaha --_--U ah poor Cid, they always get it wrong... do you just read random stories and find all this stuff? Cause this stuff seems to be coming up a lot... which ruins a perfectly good story plot XD anymoo, these are great UPDATE SOON
Le Pecore Nere
2008-01-30
ch 7,
abuseHAHAHAHA props to you b^-^d I can't remember the last time you updated... whatever, anyway, it's so true, I suppose that's why (all of these) are funny XD
MysticSpiritus
2008-01-30
ch 8,
abuseThis is possibly the funniest fic I've read. What's scary is that most of it is so true! Update this soon, man! Makes me wonder how you're gonna tackle the engima called Sephiroth.

Mystic
heaven-monument
2008-01-29
ch 8,
abuseARGH!
You've got it, my dear writers-in-residence. Although I try to avoid crappy fiction, this is damn well close to fiction not worthy for mulch. Vincent's was cool, and Cid's was gruesome and chuckle-worthy. Although it's sad that people really do write like this and call it a work of art... (shudder)
8.5/10
Continue with, say, Reno, who most fics portray him as a womanising idiot who hits on anything that has a pulse.
Nentikobe
2008-01-29
ch 8,
abuseCan't say that I've ever read a fic where Cid acted like this. Am I just lucky?
Nentikobe
2008-01-29
ch 7,
abuseThe last line about Cloud finishing off Vincent was what really made this chapter. XD I love it!
Nentikobe
2008-01-29
ch 5,
abuseI really haven't seen much of Red XI being idiotic in fics, since the vast majority of fics don't seem to include him. :(
Nentikobe
2008-01-29
ch 4,
abuseThis one is pure gold. I actually know someone who who has a sig on a forum devoted to Zombie Aeris. I'm linking him to this. :)
Youko-Kokuryuuha
2008-01-29
ch 8,
abuseWow. ._.;; ...That was... unique? :B Seriously, I haven't bee on fanfiction in a while, so some great humor always helps. Cheers to you and Mengde for an entertaining fic. :D

~Koky
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