Wow sad. Really sad. But yet I really liked it. It was good but sad

A brilliant story, made all the better by your getting Narcissa so completely in-character as we see her in HBP. I also liked your vision of Andromeda Black-Tonks, a character heard of but, to my knowledge, never seen.

Where else shall Cissa run? To the Order? She thinks that they will kill her for the outcome of her actions. To Bella? She would kill her immediately if Voldemort so ordered it and may do so anyway the fanatical beast that she is. So she goes to the only one of her family that she might be able to trust to be at least neutral.

This could be very interesting, especially if Harry Potter and his inner circle were to visit the Tonks home on their way to one of the Horacruxes and were to stumble upon Ted and Rommie's semi-welcome prisoner.

A nice bit of writing.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

Narcissa, HELL NO!! you are NOT RESPONSIBLE for that chicken **'s death.

Poor Narcissa. Very believable account of Narcissa's despair, and her first contact with her sister after many years.

Cool, I liked it very much but excuse me for being thick here...it's a while since I have read anything to do with HP :( Exactly who is Annie's daughter? And she and Narcissa are sisters?! But it's very well written :)

Extremely well written piece. I especially liked your characterisation of Narcissa. Keep up the good work, I hope to read more from you soon.

I liked this one very much! You've done a good job of humanizing Narcissa. "Darkness is my friend." That was my favorite line.

It's nice to see you posting again!

It's such an interesting angle to take on the story. I've always wanted to read more about Narcissa and her background!

Well done. You captured Narcissa's desperation very well.
Giggles "senstive' Draco.