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| tenamanda1988 2007-07-02 ch 7,  | abuseWow, its rare you find a fic where Near actually hates Mello in return XD I loved the chess battle over Matt, though I feel pretty bad for him, just being used like that. |
| parading-graveyard 2007-07-02 ch 7, | abuseOnce again, a great chapter. How important Matt was really shone through, and everyone stayed in character. Very good writing! |
| tenamanda1988 2007-06-15 ch 6, | abuseI found this chapter to be an odd combo of cute and worrying XD; I loved how you wrote Near and Matt's interaction here, and I love the idea that they used to hang out back at Wammy's, even if it was behind Mello's back. Near giving one of his ducks his real name was interesting too. looking forward to more of these ^^ |
| parading-graveyard 2007-06-15 ch 6, | abuseOh wow. I think i'm about to drop dead from how AMAZING this is. I have no clue how you can come up with such beautiful stories. Seriously, it's almost ridiculous how good these are. Just being nit-picky for a moment though: “So look, I know Mello covered his ** when he left, I just came to make sure--" and “** Christ, you still have those?” Are the little stars just for blanking out the swear words? I assume so. Just wondering, because they're kind of random and don't fit too well. But anyways, keep on writing! |
| tenamanda1988 2007-06-15 ch 5, | abuseThat was so heartbreaking D: Why did these two have to die?! Matts driving really was awesome XD |
| parading-graveyard 2007-04-28 ch 4, | abuseAww. I really love the dialogue, and how you portrayed an older Sayu. Even though we didn't see much of her in the later Death Note volumes, you did a good job on her personality. This chapter, and the last, really made me appreciate DN alot more. It also made me fangirl Matsuda again. Wonderful writing! |
| zeynel 2007-04-20 ch 3, | abuseI like your ficcies! Really interesting, I love them! |
| parading-graveyard 2007-04-17 ch 2, | abuseWow. I really have to admit, you are AMAZING. These were beautifully written, and I honestly can't find a single error in any of them. Wonderul writing, I can't wait for more! |