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oscarg
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
This is heartbreaking and beautifully written. Thank you!
Severione
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
Wow, I'm overwhelmed right now. This was very beautiful. Usually I am not the biggest fan of stories with a slash-part, but yours was really sweet, the story exciting and heartwarming... I absolutely enjoyed reading it. Thanks a lot for this great piece of fanfiction!
deeps85
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
this was ... awesome... i would definitely kiss you for this..
ahem ahem.. that would be too much.
lucylue
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
This was extremely well written and thoughtful. I really enjoyed Ron, because let's face it, anyone who can play chess as well as he is supposed to be able to isn't a complete imbecile everyone tries to make him out to be. Snape was perfectly in character, a complete git with complex problems who drives everyone insane and always manages to weasel his way out.

I really enjoyed reading this, so much in fact that I decided to review it. Lovely, well written, and interesting. Good job.
A Radical Reviewer
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
thatwas really well written and if i was logged in it'd surely make my favorites but i am not so it won't be, sorry
rekrula
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
I am always amazed when I read such a gem as your story, and note the 17 review count...then read a story where the review count is in the 100's or even 10's, and it is a total crap story.

It makes me wonder about the average age and education-level of ff net readership.

But this is a gem of a story. Thanks for sharing.
layabonifacio
2007-12-17 . chapter 1
will you please stop making me cry? or turning me to mush? again, wonderfully written. thank you so much.

i wouldn't mind to read one of your original creations. and if you decide to publish a book, let me know. i'm already one of your fans :) thank you so much.
JaceDamian23
2007-09-19 . chapter 1
ith that in mind, Ron threw his last piece of bacon to the large slobbering dog.

Harry looked alarmed. “Did you just share your food?”

Ron smiled. “Stranger things have been known to happen.”



lmfao funny


i liked the story. love that ron went to snape...love that snape did good things at the end
Weasel
2007-05-06 . chapter 1
AMAZING! This is just so human and real and utterly spellbinding, that I think I'll have to reread it sixty or so times. Completely magnificent. Bravo! This is definitely going on my list of favorite fics of all time.
Danielle
2007-05-01 . chapter 1
Fantastic!! the emotions were wonderful on all sides and I love the portrayal of Severus and Ron as well as the actions they both took. THe ending worked out rather well to ;)
tall oaks
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
What a sweet and sad story.
It seems that Ron has found some maturity during this. He went from a man just out to save Harry, to someone who was also trying to save a man he'd detested.
The part I found most interesting was the first night Ron saw Snape sleeping and having the nightmare. His connection to the damage he'd seen with Voldemort's victims was an eye openner. I'm still wondering if there was a little tease there and suggestion that Snape had been more of a victim that you're saying.
Ron obviously changed his attitudes throughout the telling of this story, as did Snape. Snape obviously wasn't trying to deny his part in what had happened under Voldemort. I liked that his only 'murder' had been Albus.
Really, this was very, very nice. Talloakslady
Hebi R.
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
All hail the great and powerful you!
Skyhiatrist
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
Absolutely breath-taking! I love everything about this story, I seriously wouldn't change a thing. Most of all I adore Ron in this fiction, so much I can barely put it into words. I'm so glad I've managed to find a fair amount of decent HarryxRon fics, by far my favourite pairing. I'm also glad that there was a honest, believable redemption of Snape in this ficiton, and the slow building of the bond between Severus and Ron was well paced. Once again congrats on a very well written, IC story that is still, in it's own way, very abstract.
Kathy
2007-04-13 . chapter 1
Succinctly put: bloody brilliant!
Javoher
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
Wow. Very dark, then you lightened it believably. Totally different from your usual tone, good job technically. Excellent plot twists. Diabolical prison with the sensory deprivation. Thank you.

Javoher
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