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Reviews for: Fascination
Charity322
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
I like the way you explore the very beginning of Ban and Jak's relationship before the rest of the Shichinintai and the difficulty Bankotsu has with his attraction to Jak and Jakotsu has adjusting to having some freedom and not having to "perform" to make someone like him.

It's interesting to watch the way their friendship/romance is slowly developing. Did you ever write about how Jakotsu got his sword? I'm imagining him as not the easiest sword fighting pupil to teach lol.
orangepencils
2008-08-03 . chapter 1
aw cute. points for fasitating :) keep it up! another one for the faves!
TraitorTatara
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
An interesting glimpse into Jyakotsu and Bankotsu's past. Very nicely done, but is it over or is there more?
I hope there's another chapter, but if not that's cool too.
ForgottenKaze
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
Nice!
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