 Charity322 2008-12-15 . chapter 1I really like this one. It shows Jakotsu slowly turning into the sadistic killer he is in the manga while still showing that he does have a softer side and a need to be loved. Torturing his way through the wounded soldiers on the battlefield and then crying in Bankotsu's arms.
It also shows some of his emotional scarring and provides a nice background for the loyalty he shows to Bankotsu.
I have to find a Ban/Jak fansite to discuss them in hehe. Everyone I know is a Sess/Inu fan when it comes to Yaoi. |
 youkai chick supreme 2008-10-01 . chapter 1very interesting piece. i liked this a lot.
plus you can see jakotsu turning from a "normal" boy (ha! like he was ever normal) to the vicious killer he is in the anime. i really liked this a lot.
nicely done. |
 TraitorTatara 2007-06-24 . chapter 1Nicely done, you have definately have talent. |
 Ranuel 2007-05-27 . chapter 1It's a good thing I qualified the comment about them seeming nicer sometimes the other day. This story really brings out Jakotsu's dark side. |