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holy shit this is good!

Sorry it took me so long to review on this. But it's a good story. It's really realistic.

Dang O,O

That was an incredibly evil scene, and I loved it!

Xemnas is such a tease XP

wonderfully written! wish there was more though :(

That was really well written! You did a great job of capturing both Sora and Xemnas' character in this, and you managed to stick to it. One thing though, I think you mightt have taken the bit about nobodies not being able to 'feel' to literally. Im pretty sure that they only cant feel emotional pain, but physical pain is different.

:) Well done, well done! I love your writing style, very smooth and easy to follow. Nice job!

I love it! :D

Great job! X3

yay ANTIFORM! *does the antiform dance*

whohoo, i wanted to read this just because of the rape, i have a maddenning interest in it (i'm weird i know) but hehe this turned out to be even freakier then i thought. Xemnas scares the hell out of me.

well we know just how far sora can go before shifting hehe don't we? Ah, this is very good introspection on Sora's part, Anti-form definitly rasies lots of questions.

For some reason this fic reminds me of a question i remember someone asking something like 'So, since Roxas was created from Sora turning into a heartless, does that mean everytime Sora goes Anti-form he creates another Roxas? Are there like a million mini Roxases running around?' i found it really cute cause haha mini Roxases haha how adoriable!

whee can't help but be symopathetic for poor molested Sora, he need a hug!

ack this one is twisted and crazy and good all in one! whee!

Uh...wow? Intense is not a strong enough word I think. I always enjoy stories where people explore the nature of Anti Form Sora. It really does add a rather sinister undertone to our otherwise happy-go-lucky hero, and it's sad that the game never touched on what that form meant.

I love Xemnas to pieces as one of my all time favorite villains, and the way that you wrote him was brilliant. His curiosity without emotion; cruelty without caring. And Sora, fighting with all that had, using his light, struggling to keep it alive. Ah! this was just so beyond intense! Loved every moment of it! Faved.

I think it's funny how everything just fits in the REAL story! _ Well done! And I love your way of typing stories! _

WhaiThat was amazing *_* It seems like most authors (at least that I've read) make Xemnas rather OOC but this was - -beautiful- *swoons and praises* Loved it to peices! Thank you for sharing

m Yummeh. XD

Ahh, the infamous Xem/Sora. Hm, I really liked the beginning for giving insight into Xemnas and setting the stage for what's to come. It was awesome because, like we talking about, it was hard to know from the game what Xemnas's motives really were. I think it's incredible that you got into his head so well. And all his speech - the rhetorical questions and all that - was very in character and brilliant.

And Sora was so freaking Sora-like. Aw. ;o; All the struggling broke my heart... Seriously, wah! But I liked the ending; it was very resolute.

I like getting to read fics that show this aspect of Xemnas, the distant, scientist type part(hope that made sense), and you really pulled it off well. One thing I noticed though was this line here, "What will you do when not even your Keyblade will not answer your call?”, there's a double negative. Overall this was a good fic, I particularly liked the last line, it wrapped the story up nicely.