 Firehedgehog 2008-05-31 . chapter 19definately continue |
 Hahligirl56 2008-04-16 . chapter 19Ooh, I love this new chapter! =D
I have to say that my favorite part was the one with Sora and his double (mysteriousness...doubt...regret, even?) You pulled it off well, and I bet you had fun writing it, no? :P
I'm glad you're planning on finishing your story, and that's very good, considering the fact that there are a lot of good Sora fanfics that are never finished, so I kindly continue to urge you to finish, because I really do love this idea, and I've enjoyed every chapter thus far! =D |
 Hahligirl56 2008-03-27 . chapter 18I have to say, I like your bit of poetry at the beginning of every chapter; makes each chapter seem unique in its own way, really. :D
Yes, I should review this chapter, too, shouldn't I? ^_^
I see you're adding more original characters; that makes the plot even MORE interesting, as they'll somehow connect in some way with the original characters. I found that one bit with Atkins, Diedi, and the wavemaster very interesting. I wonder what the curse could be...? Hm... :)
Anyways, I can't wait till Sora is back, I hope soon. After all, this fanfic is NAMED after him, isn't it? :P
Keep up the good work, and update soon, please! :D |
 Hahligirl56 2008-02-13 . chapter 17Wow...this is really a great story you have here! You've managed to get a lot of chapters out, which is good, and I hope you'll update soon again! Seriously, this story has pulled my interest, and I can't wait to see what happens to Sora and the others...he seems a lot different here than he was in SIGN, no?
Also, he brought up the name Haseo...that just has to bring a smile to my face.
Aside from several spelling errors, which is to be expected, I really do enjoy this, so keep up the great work! ^_^ |
 wolvknight 2007-07-21 . chapter 14O..M...F...G Id pimp slap Mimiru so hard for forgetting about sora for so long |
 EtherealSinger 2007-07-19 . chapter 14=D
Loved it, awesome chapter! |
 Steeple333 2007-07-19 . chapter 14Woo! ^.^ This again!~ |
 Steeple333 2007-06-23 . chapter 13I liked the real-world section. You conveyed the vagueness visually represented by static and grayscale into words. ^_^ I also like the part with Sora and Aura. That field is still the same... Hm... Was that... Skeith? Morgana? But in truth, I repeat myself.
I also liked that one part where Baltan wanted "to get the movements down" to copy. The programming thoughts were a nice touch. ^_^ |
 Steeple333 2007-06-14 . chapter 12I was in Washington D.C. I just got back. I have a job, and will only be home weekends. I'll try and keep up.
I like this a lot. What is Isabella up to..? I want to see BT and Sora meet. I want Crim to find closure with Subaru, as well. He could contact Bear, or BT. They were all connected... |
 EtherealSinger 2007-06-14 . chapter 12This is getting VERY interesting, I love it! =D
...And finally, someone that uses Bear and BT in their story. xD
I await your next update -cough- patiently! ^^ |
 wolvknight 2007-06-08 . chapter 12Good chapter plz update soon! |
 Steeple333 2007-06-02 . chapter 11Those Twinblades in Grima Lowe... Diendi and Atkins? And that woman... hm...
Again, Sora doesn't remember someone. I thought he might, since Crim is the only person to have defeated Mr. PK. ;D Hehe, I hate to bring up a stupid meme, but... "OVER NINE THOUSAND!!" XD I can believe that count, though. =3 He's pretty powerful.
I'm still intrigued by this story. The grunty is cute. ^^ I can't wait to read more! In the meantime... could you read my stuff? ^^; |
 kingdomhearts222 2007-06-01 . chapter 11Whoo! haseo seems cute in this...i mean...Sora...Gr. I'm used to him being Haseo...whatever...i'll call him Ryou for my sake. |
 wolvknight 2007-06-01 . chapter 11Love your story plz update soon!
P.S still my favorite .hack fic |
 wolvknight 2007-05-23 . chapter 10I love this story very mysterious! plz update soon! |