Oph. It's the new HP Sirius joke. *headdesk* Love the I'm not paper bit though. ^_-

Hehehehehehehehhehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehhehehehehhehehehehehehehehehahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahhahahehehhehehehehehehhehehehhahahahahah! Youre crazier than me! Write another chapter, please!

OOC is amusing. It makes them funnier. :)

That was so cool! I did read the story about the girl who tried to make 10 of them and it was really sad. This, however, is quite amusing. Good job!

So... he's not paper?

hey! awsome fanfic! i read almost all of you fics to Cousin2 all the time. (which, i think, gets on her nerves a bit...)

truble: sounds like someone else i know of who gets on MY nerves... *looks pointedly at grub*

grub: hey, that's not nice! i'm telling mommy!

truble: oh yeah? well i'm telling daddy!

grub: *eyes grow wide* NO! not daddy!!

truble: *grins*

hahaha! Pure GENIUS! Caffine! I love caffeine... especially mixed with Rosethorn! Well done! I 'clap and cheer' you for a job well done!

hehe...

I didn't think that was very funny. I liked the script writing though. Also the sick Japenese girl's name was Saduku. She died of lukiemiea before they were done. Good story and please write more.

I couldn't stop laughing! This is one of the funniest fics I've read in a long time. I especially loved the caffiene part and ...well the whole thing was priceless.
Keep Writing!
~Leia

lol! that made me giggle. it was so cute! loved it.

Yeah, they are OOC, but I'm not complaining! It makes the story funny, so good for you!
That was a really good idea: paper CRANES! Good stroke of humour.
-Amy

LOL! well done. it is really funny. though its pretty OCC. nvm. all the best to your next chapter!