This is a very realistic scene between Jackie and the Doctor. I enjoy the way they gain insight into each other. Jackie's developing trust in the Doctor is well-explained.

So, I read "Seed Pearls", and I just had to go through your profile and see what other amazing bits were hidden there. I found this, and am so happy to say that it is just as brilliant. I love how the line is somewhat skewed between the different ways that the Doctor loves Rose. He admits to thinking one way, and yet, promises to protect her like she were his own child. I think you've summed his feelings up nicely. Also, I love your Jackie character sketch in this. She's not just the screeching harpy, blaming the Doctor for "stealing" Rose from her. She understands that her daughter is unique and stubborn, and that she's traveling with the Doctor for herself, to actually live, rather than imagine what could be. All in all, an beautiful little aside to the canon-verse that fits perfectly. Oh, and as always, wonderful grammar! -Terri

Aww ... I liked that. Very nicely written, good, comfortable dialogue. I can see them sat in that cafe discussing Rose. Very touching and distracting (I'm meant to be working on something I've got to hand in at uni TOMORROW). There aren't enough Jackie stories out there, and you've certainly done her character justice.

Very good!

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Ok, how could you NOT expect me to try out another one of your oneshots? I liked this one rather well too! it's a nice point of view to wrtie i suppose. Jakie was wonderfully in charactar! I did love the fact that it really did only take one simple 'Help me' from rose... but there you go.

OH.
MY.
GOODNESS! This is SUCH a good story! You've captured the voices of Jackie and The Docter PERFECTLY! Thank you for writing this! Whee!

That was gorgeous.

Aw! That was just fantastic! Brilliant idea, wish they'd had time for a scene like that in the show. Imagine what Tennant and Coduir coulda done with it...*sighs* Beautiful writing, simply fantastic.
~HWF

Wow...just wow. This is absolutely amazing. So sweet. And it's so good for Jackie and the Doctor to reach an understanding and get things off their chests. You've got the characters and their interaction down so well. I can actually envision this as a Russell T script that would of happened. Just SO good. Love it.

really nice-i can imagiane this happening

That's a really lovely little scene. Perfectly in character, and with some gentle funny moments as well. Great stuff.

This story is still brilliantly sweet. ^^