| Reviews for Maternal Jutsu |
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Mistlan 7/1/10 . chapter 2Hmmmm, mood swings, cravings, nesting, and packing a little extra weight around the middle? Sounds like they'll be in for one heck of an adventure. |
Mistlan 3/21/10 . chapter 3I looked up a picture of Sasuke's mom, Mikoto, and a thought suddenly occured to me. Sasuke actually looks more like his mom than his dad. Can you imagine how different he's going to look by the end of the story? :D |
Yume Li 10/27/09 . chapter 3Are you ever going to continue this interesting story? Will Kakashi and Iruka ended up together? Will Sasuke and Naruto end up in the future? |
The Caprice Girl 92 7/19/09 . chapter 3i like this story i only wish you would update it |
Saskito 4/28/09 . chapter 3YAH! awesome chappie! Please update soon! |
Saskito 4/28/09 . chapter 1HA! Poor Sasuke and Naruto! Sasuke will have gray hair I think! Giggles.. |
dancingdimples95 4/25/09 . chapter 3hahahahahahhahahahaa! loved it! i so hope you finnish the story! hope for more, -mirit |
SnowFox83 3/14/09 . chapter 3 Hey, This is a great fanfic, you really should continue it. I am looking forward to finding out how you go on with it. Are you making it a KakaIru story and making them a family? Are you going to put in some SasuNaru? It would be cute if you did and the boys wanted to grow up normally instead of returning to their orginal ages when they are a few months old. Having Kakashi and Iruka as parents would be good for both of them. And having some of the abilitys. Like Kakashi and Sasuke getting his white chakra. And mabe Naruto getting smarter. But about the mpreg being common in Englind? I am not too sure. But if you put this in the 5th Harry Potter book, and put Umbridge in it, with those four together like that, and Umbridges predgedis(cant' spell that word for the life of me) that would be funny. Naruto being a prank master, Kakashi's pervy-ness, Iruka being a mother hen and prank pulling in his youth, and then Sasuke... I would make him kind of evil and protective over Naruto. OH yeah we can't forget about Kyuubi, really good torture ideas there. They are ninjas they can come up with some good ideas and if you need any help, just ask your readers or other authors. The torture that can be done to her is unemaginable. And having some of the kids excited about their pregnisies, like Harry, Ron(somewhat), Hermione, Geny, Gorege, Fred, and others. With them being able to talk to each other is really Cool. You know a good idea would be to have Naruto be born with Blond Fox tail and ears with having blood red or brown (irukas hair color) tips. CUTE! Keep his eyes blue though, wouldn't be Naruto without them. You are probably tired of reading my rambaling, so I will leave it at this. Let me know if I helped you or not. Good luck! |
manic the hedgehog 12/1/08 . chapter 3this is way too cool update soon |
Kikyohater220 11/9/08 . chapter 3I would love to see this story through though i was kinda thrown off with the HP xover! But its cool now! So update very soon! |
Hidan'sGirl247 10/23/08 . chapter 3omj i love it UP DATE SOON |
Chuni Luni 10/9/08 . chapter 3lol interesting! Please update when you can and take care! |
me 7/25/08 . chapter 3 nice work! update soon.:) |
LethaL-Grace 7/21/08 . chapter 3 cut off my review! _ So this is the continuation. (Does it look like I have nothing to do? AHEM)* Would love you for it |
lethaL-Grace 7/21/08 . chapter 3For one thing, I do believe Naruto's favourite food is spelled 'ramen', not 'raman'... ." *sweats* But hey, this is the complete opposite of a bashing session, so let's get on with the gushing, shall we? I simply love this refreshing spin on KakaIru mpreg! For one, *both* are now preggers (I have been looking for a Kakashi mpreg in vain for ages..), they are not entangled in a messy, angsty romance (yet?), and they are pregnant with their respective favourite students! Man, that must be a first in Naruto 'literature'... - *-*v ( '-') Then I read till the 3rd chappie and realised there was no more to feed my lurve for the fic. And was hooked on enough to mentally calculate that you took 3 months to publish each chapter, and it has been 6 months & 1 week since the last update. Am not trying to harry you into writing the next chappie faster (okie.. maybe I am.. *feels somewhat guilty*), I mean, I understand writer's block and all, but well, try to post something soon, yea? Plesh? Would love you for it |