Well, I took the advice in the A/N and checked out one of the more action filled chapters, and it was pretty good. Nice descriptions on the various types of weapons and ammo, gives it a sense of authenicity.

It's differebt, and definately interesting. I'll be reading more shortly, good job. :)

Your description of bodies being ripped apart makes me smile. You have a brilliant mind, Carradine, and it shows in the work that you do. I really liked this chapter and can't wait for more! :D

~ Kate ~

Good chapter; Molly and Odin seem so 'cute' together. However, bolding -red- all the time is a very cool, if not slightly distracting, technique. Every time I run into a word with 'red' in it I mentally pronounce it differently (instead of 'poured' I think 'pou-red'). Anywho, I enjoyed reading this chapter, and its on to the next one for me.

Read the first chapter; its definitely a curious and interesting start (very interesting, actually). I want to see where this goes. Odin's character is definitely interesting, although Molly is...well...she's Molly. Which is a good thing.

-DiamondKing

Oh snap! While reading this, a thought popped into my head. You know where Odin's shoulder got grazed by the bullet after going through the soccer mum's head?! Was there blood on it to infect Odin?! *Curious* Can't wait for more. Seriously, man.

OMGosh! Incredible! Eye jelly, wet snapping, erupting blood! Definately wonderfully digusting! My favorite part was "Cop #3 bled like a burst, overstuffed pizza roll." THAT was so . . . BEAUTIFUL! Totally loved the chapter, hands down.

How sad, yet cute. Marion loves him but he is with Molly. :-D
Really good. You have a way of just getting your reader's full attention! Totally loved it! :-D

Really good! There is definately a good relationship between Odin and Molly and it makes me say "Aww! How cute!" Really anxious for more!

So I finally got around to read it. Well, at least the first chapter, hehe.

So far it's great, man. I love the style you have chosen, though I'm not very familiar with it.
I like how we get into Odin's head, and how we get to know him gradually as he discovers who he is himself. Great stuff!
The dialogue is amazing too. Really get to know the characters well by what they're saying.
And how you bold 'red' is pretty cool.

One thing though; I kinda think that you could've ended the chapter a little earlier. It seemed a bit too long for a first chapter. Not that there's anything wrong with it, it's just what I would've done. Of course I haven't read the second one yet. Maybe there's a reason to why you ended it as you did.

Anyway, it's a great first chapter. It really got me hooked so I'm definitely gonna keep reading.

the TREX

Wow! And so the infection hits home! Really good! I really like the descriptions you give. Makes me feel like i've been there am watching all this! Once against, love it!
The only thing was you put Molly in the chapter near the middle when I think you wanted to put Darryl. Thats it! *Smiles* Its when you are saying where everyone was when the cop was there. But thats it!
Really good! Truly!
DBB

Okay. Finally got around to it. First two chapters didn't keep me interested. It was a little... 'blah'. Third, that caught me. Fourth, got me hooked. Although I'll never get what is with people and pistols like the Mark 23. It's very good handgun, but I don't get the fascination. Hope the character is carrying ten round mags or ones over ten that are pre-ban.

Good so far! So u must have just started this huh? Got your PM anyway so don't worry I'm reading it. I've just been busy with homework and writing the next chapters to the stories I've already started. No point in writing new ones yet when I'm not finished with the current ones. Anyway good chapter. I'll finish reading and then I'm going to myspace.


Gotta holla @ my niggaz. Peace.

Alright now, it is 10:39. I should be going to sleep about 39 minutes ago. I will try to make this coherent.

Despite the fact that this could just as easily be an original fic instead of a fanfic (only read first chapter so far), I like it. I was a tad confused at where they were at first (first a hopsital or something, but then talking about classes and stuff). Finally figured out it must be a campus with a medical school or something...or maybe I completely freakin' missed it cause I'm half-asleep. I apologize if I haven't read this to the best of my ability.

Yeah, so, I'll read the other chapters tomorrow, when I feel like dead. Good start, though.

Wow! I'm totally diggin' it! This is really good, Carradine! Very very good. I like the relationship that each of the characters have with eachother. Looking forward to more, of course!